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Sandile on the Beach By lutro -- Report

Ophelia takes her Brionne out for a nice walk along the beach. Despite her mother's warning, she wanders away from where most of the beach-goers were and ends up alone with her Pokémon. The girl and her Brionne, relaxing on the sand, are ambushed by a pair of hungry Sandile, who were hiding underground! With no Pokémon training experience, Brionne and Ophelia are left to fend for themselves against the wild intruders! It does not go well for them.

This story was commissioned by  PKMNguy6262!

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Pkmnguy6262

Posted by Pkmnguy6262 4 years ago Report

was a pleasure once again to comission ya! story turned out great and definetly looking forward to the next comission!^^<3

VoraciousSincerity

Posted by VoraciousSincerity 4 years ago Report

Woah, this was pretty good...but then the part with the mother made go nuts! This story is awesome!! Makes me glad I plan to catch a Sandile and train it up whenever I get to playing Pokemon Y...

VoraciousSincerity

Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report

Dang it, I was trying to add the "Belly rubs" tag, but somehow accidentally proposed a Deletion of "Belching Clothes". Sorry everybody, I don't know how to fix that mistake...

lutro

Posted by lutro 2 years ago Report

Got you covered, no worries! Authors can accept and reject tag suggestions.

VoraciousSincerity

Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report

Yeah, I was hoping for that, thank you. I just hate when I make a mistake and can't personally fix it...

I still love this story, it's just so dang good!! You and PKMNguy did something great here!!

lutro

Posted by lutro 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad it hit home for you!