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A young rabbit woman is stuck at work late, and must find her way back home after the start of Hunting Hours.
Happy Vore Day 2020!
This has been a labor of love for the past several weeks and I'm hoping to dive back into this world again soon! I'm still working on becoming a better writer, so if there are any helpful comments please do not hesitate to post them below! Thanks!
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Posted by Justsomeone 4 years ago Report
That was amazing!
Posted by sambarton20 4 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I've been working very hard on my writing lately and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Do you have any notes? Anything in particular that you enjoyed or things that I might be able to improve upon?
Posted by Justsomeone 4 years ago Report
It pretty much hit all my buttons. I enjoyed the digestion aspects, how the people acted post-vore. It pretty much was perfect from start to finish.
Posted by sambarton20 4 years ago Report
Yeah I'm a big fan of things being super casual on the Predator's side, like this is how things have to be so that's how they are. Thanks again, I'm glad I could hit all your buttons! Keep an eye out for more to come!
Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report
Absolutely fantastic. It's been a long time since I've read a vore story as good as this.
Posted by sambarton20 3 years ago Report
Very high praise! Thank you so much!
Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report
There's never enough Hunting Hours stories, wish more people used this setting. And it ticked all the boxes for me. Particularly happy that you included post vore sex as it's something I'm majorly into.
And the bit at the end in the cafe was a nice touch, how she was in the same place she would have been had she not been eaten, but serving a radically different role. Would have prefered the familiar customers to be her friends on their coffee break, chatting and wondering where she is as it would have made her absense from her old life more impactful to me personally, but I understand why you'd want to use her boss.
As I said, great story.
Posted by sambarton20 3 years ago Report
Hunting Hours is easily my favorite setting to write in. Shout out to BizzareBlue for introducing it to me, check out their works!
And I like that idea with her friends. I wanted to brings things back around with her boss, but I really like the idea of her friends being the ones there, might use that for another story sometime ;P
Again, thank you!
Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear that you like the idea and look forward to any future stories you might right. And yeah, its my all time favourite setting too. I'm a little obsessed with it. BizzareBlue is what got me interested in vore stories again. A Short Delay is probably my favourite vore story of all time, it just completely blew me away and radically changed my perspective on what is possible in a vore story. Really opened my eyes to the potetial.