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Sometimes it's nice to have a meal out. Other times nothing beats having your meal dropped off on your doorstep!
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I like the set up where you get focused on the prey mind.
Posted by sambarton20 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I like to try and put myself in the shoes of the POV character as much as I can when I write. I'm glad it came through!
Posted by heromc 2 years ago Report
Oh this went dark! Good stuff, I really liked it :)
Posted by sambarton20 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much! I do like to skew things a bit more realistic and a belly is not going to be kind to those inside it
Posted by ilikefour 2 years ago Report
Holy cow, that was intense. Really extraordinary, Sammy! It's great to see your writing has only improved :)
Much love from your favorite mouse <3