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”A-Ahh… I-I… never thought I’d be sharing this, but… he convinced me that I should, s-sooo… I-I wrote a story… about something special the Professor did for me. P-Please… don't judge me on this! He’s… awwhh…”
Word Count: 4,828.
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Happy Vore Day, everyone! 8/8 is here! I wasn't able to get something out for this special day last year but this year is different - a very… unique story for this day, and… what’s this? An actual shorter story?! Well if you wanna count just under 5,000 words as ‘short’, then yes - it's a miracle!
Y’know, this is my 51st story & this happens to be my first that takes on the pred’s POV - probably the only one to find that strange but hey, it was another new prospect to tackle! I really like Bernie… that's totally not obvious with tne fact I’ve had her as my pfp since 3H’s release last year, so it only felt fitting I give her & her beloved professor the spotlight for this special day - I even let her write her own description at the top, aww~! Maybe she’ll even reply to your comment, should you leave one here! I’m sure she’d appreciate it~
Anways, I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I had fun writing it~! Writing from Bernie’s POV as the pred was real interesting & it was also my first real stab at first person! I hope I nailed it well enough & again, Happy Vore Day! Go have some fun~ x3
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& as always, the visual representation for Bernie & Byleth~:
Bernadetta: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/a/a7/Bernadetta_Heroes.png/revision/latest?cb=20200305144951
Byleth: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/fireemblem/images/a/a9/Male_Byleth_Heroes.png/revision/latest?cb=20190722104551
The art used for the thumbnail can be found here: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4963236&tags=bernadetta_von_varley
Wow, apparently it had almost been an entire year since I last wrote anything for a 3H character… how in the…? Well whatever, that long time gap has been broken now, all thanks to Bernie~
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Posted by OhSevenTen 4 years ago Report
Bernie's first person perspective was written really well! Very cute and warm.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 4 years ago Report
(I'm really happy to see you've enjoyed it, considering this is my first attempt at writing in the pred's POV!)
"O-Oh, you... you think my story is...cute... a-and WARM?!... o-oh gosh...!"
Posted by Quartersnake 4 years ago Report
I usually don't leave comments here, but I simply had to for this piece! Bernadetta did a great job writing this. Also, I think it would be amazing to hear about her work with Petra! If she's not too busy with Bylad, of course.
Posted by SupremeToadLord 4 years ago Report
(I actually do plan on eventually writing a prequel or sequel to this going more in-depth with her 'training' with Petra! Could be another real occurrence story she writes like this one so that most likely would be more 1st person content & heck, Petra would get in on the vorish action too, heheh~ :3)
"Y-You... think I did a great job? B-But...... awwhh...
Posted by Datonenumbnuts 4 years ago Report
you capture bernies character amazingly well. :) It was a total delight to read. Ill have to be sure to check out more of your stories.