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Fey was just living her ordinary life, purchasing groceries, when her world was literally upended and she’s thrust head-first into the shopping cart of a passing dragon. This was not on her itinerary for the day.
The story is an accompaniment to the amazing image by my master Ragnar here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/635514
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Posted by FaceInCrowd42 4 years ago Report
*snickers* The audacity! XD
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Snatched up right there in public, nowhere is safe for meatgirls <3
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
I'm really loving this combo of great art, and a story to match :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm really enjoying it too. It's a great starting off point for a story, trying to imagine how things got here and what comes next. Plus it means I can go lighter on some of the duller parts of writing involving lengthy descriptions of stuff. With this combo, I don't need to describe characters to the same extent because you can see them.
Posted by BeautifulBad9 4 years ago Report
I do like preygirls wearing yoga pants
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Me too, they're so easy to strip off. Not like jeans that can be a struggle even for willing prey. Although for poor Fey here, the reason she likely got picked up was because of those yoga pants showing off her "assets" so clearly <3
Posted by BeautifulBad9 4 years ago Report
well I just like them anayways and if I were the pred I would have claimed her for that reason
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
That's an excellent reason to have claimed her <3
Posted by toin 4 years ago Report
"The hardest part had been holding back her moans, as she didn’t want to give her owner the satisfaction of knowing how enjoyable she found the task.
*Chop. Chop. Chop.*
But no matter how many vegetables she chopped, her gaze always drifted to the three she'd been explicitly told *not* to slice up. The largest apple, carrot, and turnip in the cart. Fey gulped as she wondered where her owner planned to insert those..."... and ..."Whimpering and offering to perform any sexual desire he could imagine if only he didn’t eat her. What she hadn’t realised is that he could do both." ...and... "He preferred her like this, quiet, compliant, and preparing her final bed of vegetables...
*Chop. Chop. THUD!*"....
...oh yes..... the crescendo in this last section.... just built up and "released" the tension so perfectly!
I take it I've whet your curiosity...?
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Mmhm yes I thought it made for a fun climax. That THUD as the last vegetable has finished being sliced. We all know what happens to her next <3
I'm glad it was able to release your tension so well <3
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 4 years ago Report
each chop is one step closer to doom but don't chop and he may forgo vedgatables all together.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Mmhmm exactly, that's a nice way to put it <3
Posted by VictorBound 4 years ago Report
I liked it. It was a good story that told the reader a lot, without holding their hand and blatently spelling it out for them.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thank you! It helps that there's an image ref to go with it, so I don't need to spend too long describing how she's bound, or where she is.
I find it's hard to be confident your implications are being picked up by readers, it's so tempting to hit them over the head with explanations pointing it out. So I'm glad it worked out here <3
Posted by Genericcook 4 years ago Report
Loved this one! Always been a big fan of quick reversal stories, and grocery stores too
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks~ I really love those role changes too, the transition from ordinary woman living her life to meatgirl is generally my fav part of dolcett settings. It makes it so thrilling, like it could happen IRL.