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A pizza delivery girl's fantasy comes true when she makes her latest delivery.
I wrote this story for an artist I'm a big fan of, Storpotaten. He's long since retired from the community, but his influence definitely lives on in those of us who were lucky enough to be inspired by his genius work. As you read, you'll find three original pieces of art that he created as illustrations.
Truth is, I was going to let this old thing crumble to dust in the Internet Archives, but it turns out it was a huge influence back in the day on one of my current biggest vore heroes, the great Tsavo! Apparently, it turned him on to digestion as an integral part of vore stories, so I guess all of my vore story readers have me to thank for that. You're welcome!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JLyKKPBhQINdRknSl1RmpgcSt2y9MstpNj4xFN_0H-k/
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Posted by Tsavo 4 years ago Report
Fffff, I used to worship at the altar of this story long ago.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
Once more, the sacrifice is made. The digested pizza that overflows the altar has summoned the Great Vore Ones, and now nothing less than flesh will be acceptable. Prepare thyself, mortal, for the feast is about to commence.
Posted by Whereaminow27 4 years ago Report
I hope to see this continue. Like Heather wants more pizza, and Simon calls her female friend over, and they have the new girl feed her, and ends up taking of her shirt and etc cause of the grease, and Simone starts to not be able to handle it and gives the girl a push into Heather's mouth and down her throat.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
In fact, I'm writing the sequel at this very moment! It might not happen exactly as you just said, but I still think you're going to enjoy what happens.
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
This story was everything back then
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
It's crazy to me that anyone even remembers this silly little thing, let alone loves it this much, so thank you for saying something!
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Dude I’m a huge fan and have loved your work for years. You’re one of the few writers still around from when I started . People like JoeBro have just up and disappeared
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
We've lost quite a good few over the years, haven't we? We'll pour one out for them... straight down the gullet of a gorgeous woman. It's what they would have wanted.
Posted by Monopolus 4 years ago Report
Seriously, this was the story that got me into your work. It's always a good read to come back to.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
I think it was the second story I ever wrote. Definitely the first one that was finished from beginning to end.
Posted by noisekeeper 4 years ago Report
Definitely a blast from the past. Influenced my tastes in digestion quite a bit as well, your descriptions of the the mass of cheese wadding up in her stomach and how it would be difficult to process were lines I always re-read back in the day haha.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
I think I got that idea from a video about eating fondue. It showed how the cheese, once cooled, became this giant mass in the stomach, and I just thought that was the hottest fucking thing in the world.
Posted by Monopolus 4 years ago Report
Oh hell yeah, the image of Heather just bloated to hell with a belly full of undigested cheese is amazing.
Posted by The K 4 years ago Report
I remember this story. Heather was one of my first fictional girl crushes in story form. The way everything is described, the cheese in her digestive track, the gas bubble, everything. This is one of the first stories that got me into my fetish.
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
It always makes me happy to hear that my stories inspired people's fetishes. Also, Heather was based on a real person, and yeah, well worthy of such a crush.
Posted by mclovin 4 years ago Report
This story is a classic. I remember reading them all on your website years ago!
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
Well, my favorites are slowly returning here, so keep an eye on this space.
Posted by KimMadcox 4 years ago Report
I remember that story!
I also remember sticky fingers while reading it, which was more then once.
Thanks a lot for reuploading it. It is a masterfully written piece that brought a lot of joy to my younger self^^
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
It's strange to have people enjoy my old works so much, because I of course feel they are my weaker stories. So it's nice to know they still connected with people despite having been a less experienced writer at the time.
Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report
Will you every write more stories about Elle?
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
That's the plan!
Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report
Any hope of something before January 2021?
Posted by ElPortero 4 years ago Report
Possibly. Depends on a lot of factors in this currently very insane reality that we are living through.
Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report
I honestly think people being cooped up would have led to more writing what with boredom.
You ever read any of Frenchsnacks works?
Posted by GoTee1 3 years ago Report
I think this is the quintessential stuffing story. It might show its age, but I think a lot of us stuffing writers have this to thank for a lot of the basic imagery we think of as cliché now.
Honestly after all this time I don't think I'm on board with a proper vore sequel - the sweet memories of Heather and Simone are weirdly wholesome after all this time - but that's not my call to make. Whatever happens I expect it'll be a good time.
Posted by ElPortero 3 years ago Report
The idea I had for said follow-up was essentially in the vein of "Gremlins 2: The New Batch" (one of my all-time favorite films) where the original stands unchanged and the sequel is sort of this insane creation that simultaneously should not exist and yet also stands boldly on its own terms. I may fail miserably at this quixotic task, but that is what I hope to accomplish, should I ever manage to finish a proper draft.
Posted by Halt04 1 year ago Report
That sounds glorious. The little taste of vore fantasy in it was great, and as much as I adore stuffing in general- it'd be fun to see where Heather could go.
Posted by ElPortero 1 year ago Report
I might make the "insane sequel" version happen someday. We'll see how I feel after living with the characters again.
Posted by Halt04 1 year ago Report
Seeing both would be grand! I hope it's going swell so far!
Posted by ElPortero 2 years ago Report
You'll be happy to know that someone has commissioned a sequel in line with the original, so I'm going to scrap my insane vore idea. Honestly, your comment is part of the reason I paused my version. I never really understood before just how much people loved "Stuffed Crust" for EXACTLY what it is. So, thank you for sharing your thoughts; they made a real difference!
Posted by Halt04 1 year ago Report
Glory be!
Posted by Realfutanarilover 2 years ago Report
Where can I find just the pictures
Posted by ElPortero 2 years ago Report
I made my illustrations folder viewable, so you can find all three pictures here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1KopyFyBGnHOw8_Gc9kFtrE3J5ucQ4pLs
Posted by Zrekkia 1 year ago Report
As others have said, this story (as well as The Morning After) has had significant influence to so many stuffing enthusiasts over the years, myself included. If we had an equivalent to the Library of Congress, this would definitely be in it.
Thank you.
Posted by ElPortero 1 year ago Report
Thank you for your very kind words! It's comments like this that keep me going despite all the setbacks.
Posted by Zrekkia 1 year ago Report
Be strong my friend. Your work has been and still is admired by many. Only a tiny percentage of people who are positively impacted by your writing will ever make themselves known.
I almost forgot 'In Cob We Trust'. Legendary.
The old 'SurviVore', along with 'Stuffed Crust' was a big part of my awakening, so to speak. I have you to thank (or possibly to curse) for a lot of what I'm into.