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Daniel gets a little more than he expected when he opens his mail order delivery to find a whole meatgirl looking back at him, rather than the pre-cut torso he expected. This is far more than Daniel or his small spit could ever handle. With Dolcett Farm Girls operating a no-return policy in place, what is he to do?
This is part 1/4 of my first commissioned story. The full story has become far longer than anything else I've ever written, so I thought it'd be best to release it in parts. Each part covers one day in-universe, and will be released a few days apart. The length has provided a wonderful opportunity to explore aspects shorter stories can't, involving a cute romance arc as Daniel and his meatgirl get to know each other. I really hope folk enjoy reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it.
Special thanks to heromc for proposing such an enticing idea that upended the usual Dolcett story arc, and for being such a delight to work with. I'll be open to further commissions once this has been fully published, please get in touch if you want to know more. <3
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Fingers crossed that you're able to finish this before Ragnar eats ya! This has seriously been the funnest colab I've ever done, and you've been waay too patient with my nitpicky ass!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Fortunately I think I can distract Ragnar with a few other meatgirls before he gets to me.
I've had a lot of fun collaborating with you too! Every nitpick has improved to story, so please nitpick away <3
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
(I promise to try to hold back long enough)
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
She won't need her legs or breasts to finish it, I'm sure those could tide you over with a side of veggies!
Posted by toin 4 years ago Report
Oh god, this is building up to be soooo good! ...I love the intimacy in this story... almost makes me expect a plot twist... ;)
This reeks with effort Bunny, the exchanges are smoother than Holly's legs <3 Can't wait to read part 2!... it's made me quite a bit.... tense.... ;)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Mmhm thanks toin, so glad you liked it <3
There's so much fun teasing, cooking, spitting, stewing, baking, and just general sex to come. I can't wait to share it~ Heromc came up with an absolutely fantastic concept here.
Posted by toin 4 years ago Report
oh, that's music to my ears, you know me! I absolutely love your writing, (credits to heromc, of course) you take ideas and turn them into a lewd, captivating journeys into the depths of perversion!<3
I can't get enough!
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
No credits to me are deserved, my idea was they just ate the old hotpockets in his freezer and avoid all the spitting, stewing, baking, and just general sex. BW slapped me and said we were doing it her way from now on!
Posted by toin 4 years ago Report
modesty will get you nowhere, my friend. props to you for catching a good writer's attention (and inevitably contributing to the brainstorming process). Kudos.
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
A very tantalizing start. As always, very good writing from a very good meatgirl.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thank you master, I hope this pleases you enough to hold off on my journey to your gullet for another few days~
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
I suppose you've earned some more time, just be careful when it's around mealtimes~
Posted by ThatRaptor 4 years ago Report
oh wow, this really is good! there's way too little stories about the predator actually getting to know and like their prey before its dinnertime. I'm glad you're taking your time with it!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks~ And yeah I agree, generally stories tend to rush to the vore/cooking part. I normally don't have the patience to write an awful lot of build up, but this has been really fun~
Posted by stefand 4 years ago Report
This is a very promising start. This sounds like the start of a great bittersweet story. Can`t wait to find out if it will end more bitter (for the meetgirl) or sweet. ;)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I guess whether the ending is sweet or bitter depending upon whether he uses ranch dressing or spicy BBQ sauce on her <3
Posted by VictorBound 4 years ago Report
Im waiting for the next part!!!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I'm just writing it now~