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Daniel continues to get to know his meatgirl Holly as she introduces him to all the possible ways a meatgirl might be cooked. This is part 2 of 4 of an ongoing story that starts here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/637661
Special thanks to heromc again for coming to me with such a delightful story premise. It's been an absolute delight to work on and collaborate with him.
I'm also open to further commissions once this has been finished, feel free to get in touch if you want to discuss a proposal (I'm open to a lot of different ideas)~
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
You had the patience of a saint working with me through this! I don't think there's a single part of this you didn't rewrite because of my constant nagging.
To anyone looking to commission/butcher her, I highly recommend it! She really brings ideas to life, and her thighs were decadently tender! I'd certainly rate her as an A+ writer, and a B+ meatgirl!!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I'll have to work on that meatgirl rating, but I'm not sure if I should be hitting the gym or avoiding it for the best rating <3
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Unfortunately, I think Ragnar has stretched you out beyond the chance of even a A-
:(
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
But that just means more stuffing! I should get *extra* points for being stretched out~
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
You did! But the penalties for not having a nice tight muff to chew on were too big of a hit! We even tried giving you bonus points for your perky breasts but it still wasn't enough :(
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Damn, I guess I should just count myself fortunate my writing is graded above my meat, or else I'd already be in the oven~
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Unfortunately the oven is booked til November, All we have available is the small grinder meant for limbs. It'll be a tight fit, but I'll be there to help :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Oh yes I know exactly how you'll help "poke" me down into the grinder. No hands needed.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
No hands needed besides the damn grinder! It's last years model, still only has the hand crank! Gunna be inch by inch to get you down!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
With a hand crank there's plenty of time to pause, as you find "other" uses for my mouth, or posterior, depending upon which way you fed me into it~
Posted by toin 4 years ago Report
Your work is always such a joy to read, Bunny. This chapter caused a whirlwind of emotions in me, being the perfect love story that had never been written before, that had been begging to be told since the beginning of time.
Now I can only hope it will end as all love stories should, and never do. I'm sure you catch my drift.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
That whirlwind of emotion has been the hardest white rabbit to chase, but I think Bunny has done a fantastic job catching it in this part! Getting the right balance of seriousness and absurdity has been a fun game as well as getting the characters and their relationship to feel "right".
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Has hermoc says, yeah it's been a challenge getting the tone right for those two, and has been the cause of the vast majority of the changes/edits required, as it sometimes lost its track and we needed to revise it. I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out though~
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
Fantastic as always.
This dear meatgirl deserves all the praise.
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Aww thank you <3 It's always extra special getting praise from my master~
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
That's because you're a *very* good girl.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Buuuuunny!! Keep away from the nice lizards mouth. I see the way he's drooling at ya. At least finish the 3rd part before getting nommed plz!
Posted by Genericcook 4 years ago Report
Fantastically well written! Sadly not up my alley since I only enjoy oral vore or whole live roasts, but the experience is a joy to read
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Aww you're very kind, thank you! And yeah I tend to prefer vore or whole roasts too, which I expect I'll be back to in future stories after Too Fresh is finished.