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A chubby, sultry nurse feeds herself to her patient, who is weak after he (or she, I guess, if she has a cock) is recovering from illness.
There's a lot to be done with the classic nurse fetish in the vore space I think, but it's one of those ideas I haven't had good inspiration for until now. I also like the idea of prey referring to themselves as prey animals, like hens that are chubby, so I put a bit of that here. Not sure if that will confuse anyone.
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Posted by BloodPuma 4 years ago Report
Very nice!!! It's super sex and hot!!
Buif you're looking for a critique, I think a first person view may have worked a little better. Though a more detailed description of the nurse is all I think it needs.
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
Yeah I was trying to keep it vague so the reader could imagine her however they wanted but that doesn't work for everyone. It also goes a bit faster to do it this way but I have been relying on this method a smidge too much as of late
Posted by BloodPuma 4 years ago Report
Yeah, I get where you're coming from with that. Let the reader imagine there own prefect prey, it works pretty well!
Though if you want to back out of you writing comfort zone, it's never a bad idea to experiment with your writhing! As a fellow writer, I'd even be happy to help in any way I can!
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
I've got some ideas for how I want to change things up, but I'm always open to prompts and requests and stuff if you have any ideas.
Posted by BloodPuma 4 years ago Report
I do have quite a few ideas raddling around in my head, but I think I'll probably write them myself. Besides I wouldn't want to bring them up in the common section. Though it could be fun to see who we can take an idea in our own two separate direction!! I don't suppose you have a discord?
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
I don't have a Discord, sorry :( I only take messages on here
Posted by BloodPuma 4 years ago Report
Too bad... Still, I guess we could DM back and forth a bit about ideas we have!
Posted by TW 4 years ago Report
Nicely done.
Posted by Bellybook 4 years ago Report
Thanks!