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Day 19 - Vroom Vroom Vampire By ZeldaNoVorsu -- Report

So, this story is a mix of some of my ideas that I had for it. First was including Dracula from Castlevania somehow. At first, I was going to have him appear as a boss character like I did with Phantom Ganon during the Mario Kart arc of Tales of the Wanderer. Then, I remembered Vampire Wario was a thing, and I was going to have him be a result of Dracula somehow, scare Baby Peach, and then get eaten by normal Peach as punishment. But, as I was refreshing myself on Vampire Wario on the Mario Wiki, I came across the Vampire Candy item from my Mario Party 8 days, and I decided I wanted Vampire Peach as well. I decided to send Wario and Dracula off to do their own thing in the beginning, and then use the "Wario On-demand" (a name I find hilarious that  derpsquid42 came up with in the comments of A Windy Dinner after Zelda produces him seemingly out of nowhere) to bring him in for Peach to eat, which will turn her into a more real vampire later, as the Vampire Candy just makes her want coins. The "Peach soothes Baby Peach with funny digestion noises" was something my friend  SmaxtheDestroyer came up with months ago for something completely unrelated, but I should give credit where credit is do. The gas portion was all me though, and a logical conclusion to eating Wario... Also, RIP Bowser at the end maybe? Tell me what you think happened.

Thumbnail sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/mattcarberry/art/Peach-the-Vampire-642001176

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derpsquid42

Posted by derpsquid42 4 years ago Report

I think I saw a post somewhere about how Wario is a vampire's worst nightmare. He has no neck to bite, his favorite food is a vampire's worst nightmare, and he's immortal if he wants to be. And Wario on-demand app? Why didn't I think of this! All I need is Wario and a couple hundred double cherries. I'll make millions!

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

Because Wario thought of it first. He wanted to make millions, knowing that his primary clientele has essentially infinite money as royalty. But yes, that guy is definitely not someone a vampire would want to mess with... if they want to live.

rockysavannah

Posted by rockysavannah 4 years ago Report

Seeing someone as girly as Peach having a stuffed tummy and belching is cute, especially when she says 'excuse me!'

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

I agree. Stuffing and vore tend to lead the body to do less than polite things, so it's enjoyable to see cute, polite characters deal with the effects.

rockysavannah

Posted by rockysavannah 4 years ago Report

Peach using her tummy noises to make her baby self giggle is adorable too.

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

That was fun little idea, and I figured this was a good time to include it.

SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 4 years ago Report

... *scraps work on my ‘meal-to-go’ app...* Dammit, why is it whenever I get a fun idea, someone beats me too it? Lol. Just kidding. Love that idea though. Also Love the ‘coin-pire’ thing too.

SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 4 years ago Report

Also I got one don’t think this story is over. I wanna see what happens next with vampy peach.

SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 4 years ago Report

For one, not ‘got one’

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

It is left open ended. I've continued stories that I didn't intend to before, so if I see an opportunity arise, I'm sure Vampy Peach will return.

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

When writing consecutive stories like this, I eventually start exploring fun ideas to help speed up the vore process and also keep it interesting. The 'Coin-pire' thing was actually Nintendo's idea, and I just wanted to use Vampire Peach in both a silly (albeit) canon scenario and then a more realistic one.

The K

Posted by The K 4 years ago Report

What a read. Peach's bulging cheeks merging into one as she swallowed Wario was a well described moment. As was the heavy gas bloating cheeks, followed by her smelly garlic burp. It was great seeing her trying to hold it back with those cheeks and how it settled over the area. Smelly burps are the absolute best! Peach Bomber's belch was also a great name. So much good stuff in this story. The ending with her full tummy sloshing with each flap made me chuckling.

ZeldaNoVorsu

Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 4 years ago Report

This one had lots of gassy goodness in it. Anytime you see a story tagged with Wario and F/M, expect a smelly garlic burp or fart at some point.