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A skeptical goth girl entertains a spooky ghost story as told by her sunny, blonde childhood friend. The tale speaks of Echo House....and a sinister whistling presence living beneath it.
Commission by Narrows
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Posted by ShadedRest 4 years ago Report
Damn that was good.
Like got me invested and I swear I had a shiver in my mind.
That was a horror story that has me envious, the descriptions and emotions were so well layed out, the surreality explored perfectly.
And the pacing had me transfixed to keep on.
Posted by ouphe 4 years ago Report
I LOVED THIS HOLY FUCK
Posted by Matanuiv 4 years ago Report
Holy fuck, that was damn good! Inadvertently spoiled it for myself a bit due to a snafu with the tags loading before the story, but it didn't lessen any of the intended impact. So vivid, creepy, and immersive that I actually forgot what site I was on by then end of it... Very well done! Hope maybe you'll write more like this in the future.
Posted by cheeseandmango 4 years ago Report
Holy Crap, this style of story isn't even my cup of tea but damn is it well written. It's rare for me to get so invested in a story yet here we are, bravo good sir!