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A player of a VR MMO encounters an odd glitch that may have lasting results.
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This is a commission for which the commissioner has become difficult to contact. It took me forever to get it done, so I can't fault the delay on payment, but no reply in several weeks. So if you like TF and TG, enjoy.
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Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Interesting
Posted by Mike225 4 years ago Report
I love it! :D
Posted by hibixus 4 years ago Report
Amazing! You do the best squishy/inanimate stuff
Posted by Crushermach3 4 years ago Report
I really like stories like these.(in fact this has been doing weird things to my tummy for the past couple hours just thinking about it)
Although the ending kinda takes me out of it. It just doesn't seem very game-y to be showing off an item to someone and they can essentially break it without so much as a pop-up. Plus the whole buffing thing is kind of a weird inclusion.
I think I actually came up with a more fluid way to incorporate what this seems to be going for with what I call the Soul Infusion System. Essentially you can transfer souls between objects and each soul gives different stats. This gives way more flexibility to what the victim can end up as (multiple transfers lends itself to sequels, there's the possibility of more than one soul in an object, the body can be used for an assortment of ideas once the soul is yanked out, etc.) and it makes for an interesting upgrade system to boot!
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Neat idea. In this case, it was a commission and the commissioner specifically requested an extended and detailed transformation scene.