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A babysitting gig for a young Latina turns voracious.
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Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
she ate a 3yr old child
i hope that alice's parent hunt carmen down and eat her and make her go through the pain of digestion
Posted by Natolin 4 years ago Report
Bruv, I hate to say it but if you’re that easily offended you should find a new site
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
never said i was offended. i like revenge stories where cruel people are punished. and this would make a great one
Posted by Cridel 4 years ago Report
People tend to take anything you say that isn't 100% positive as an insult. Happens to me all the time. Just think of this place as a safe space and it gets easier to adjust.
Posted by TETRO 4 years ago Report
Gentle preds are always cute.
Posted by Natolin 4 years ago Report
Wow, truly fantastic. I loved your descriptions of digestion after the stomach stages, those are so often overlooked in Vore stories
Posted by Cridel 4 years ago Report
I pretty much like it, but I do have one notable gripe.
How can Carmen smell Alice like she was food?
It wouldn't be an issue if the characters were anthro and Carmen was a wolf. However, humans do not have strong sense of smell. Our "best" sensory perception is our eyes as the rest is much less in quality compared to the majority of life with similar sensory perception.
However, human pheromones can be something to pick up, but it should trigger a "horny" sensation rather than a "hungry" sensation.
So I was kind of hoping would lead into that scenario in which Carmen had sex with Alice, which then leads to vore, because why not. Vore is ultimately an extension of sex (oral is just a whole body blow job with a swallowing).
But the rest of it is phenomenal, including the vore. Just think it needed something added to it to bring it towards that desired outcome.
By the way, Doomed's comment is about a lack of input from the parents in the story and I guess it is because it feels a bit empty given there is no conclusion as to that outcome. So he/she surmised some sort of vengeance outcome in his head. It may seem a bit aggressive and negative, but he/she thought it might be a nice way to move towards. Alice is a nice little girl, so it makes sense for her folks to be a bit vengeful.
My personal take would be to have Carmen be a futanari and cockvores Alice (probably after fucking her), then fucks/impregnates her mother to ultimately make Alice her sister-daughter, which in turn leads to her fucking Alice's former mother due to change in parenting. As Alice's DNA is altered to include Carmen's in place of her father's and some of Celia's, although Celia could just be a surrogate and therefore genetically Alice is Carmen's and Mrs. Richardson's. You could still include digestion, but due to some circumstance Alice keeps getting reborn in whoever eats her given the person is subsequently impregnated or impregnates someone else. I also am not a fan of disposal as to me it is sort of disrespectful. Full absorption in which everything becomes part of the body of the pred is much more satisfying for me.
Posted by zkillm 2 years ago Report
Are you seriously saying you wished a women had gay sex with a 3 year old
Posted by kingarthur0205 2 years ago Report
Do you have a link to the thumb tag?