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On the cusp of her 40th birthday, Noriko Kashiwagi's midlife crisis takes a turn for the unexpected when she has a confrontation with Inaba's star idol, Rise Kujikawa.
So I have a confession to make, this is DEFINITELY heavily inspired by the Kashiwagi commission theweirdone445 got a few years ago. Seeing that pic a few months ago is honestly the entire reason I started to consider her as a good pred candidate for Rise - who has never exactly been my favorite of the P4 girls? Out of the main cast, she's the one I'm definitely the least attached to, at an astounding...not at all.
Which considering how much I adore my favorite and second favorite, ouch. Like, I don't hate Rise, and I don't hate the Lovers arcana, but for some reason they're always the ones I never really connect with all that well, it's really kind of weird.
But anywho, I started writing this on the 2nd, so pretty soon after I uploaded the second Fuuka chapter, and with a pretty crazy turnaround time for me. Yeah, I wrote this story in two days, spending a good chunk of yesterday and today on it. Part of me is a little worried that might be easy to tell, that maybe it's not as good as the stuff I've put out before in some areas, but...I don't know. I mean I enjoyed making it, and it's done! Doing a substantial rewrite would be a pain in the ass, I don't wanna do it.
Initially, I took a pause from writing because I needed some time away from the big overarching multi-part story, but once I remembered the one pic again, and starting talking about it with a friend, this idea just sounded too good to pass up.
And honestly, I think smaller, single part stories like this are a great creative palette cleanser between expansive ones like the Fuuka one. And if all goes according to plan, I'll have a few more like this going up in the next couple of months.
Wanna thank my friend Amagi2 for not only helping with the initial conversation that sparked me into seriously writing this, but also with the name, totally their idea. I've been trying to implement puns in the titles of my stories, just as a little fun thing, and I thought this really worked.
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Posted by Amagi2 4 years ago Report
You really Rise'd above my expectations with this one :^)
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Happy to Rise to the occasion!
Posted by MetalSlime 4 years ago Report
At this point, there’s only one logical next step.
Write Persona 5 vore
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
It's coming in due time! Just gotta finish up the Fuuka trilogy first, and then I'll probably end up doing a P5 thing. Got a few ideas in mind for when the time comes.
Posted by EmblemMan 4 years ago Report
Funnily enough, I was actually thinking once upon a time of writing a reverse scenario of this - Rise eating Kashiwagi! Still, you beat me to the punch as far as this combination goes, and with a great story!
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Aww, well thank you! And hey, I definitely think Kashiwagi would be a suitable meal herself - I think the irony of such a jealous woman wanting to get rid of a "problem" like Rise, only for it to completely backfire on her would be hilarious.
Posted by Schrodinger123 4 years ago Report
Notable the actual amount of weight you would gain doing work based on pork which is the closest meat to human flesh would be 1/3 of the total weight of whatever person was devoured so she would gain roughly 40 pounds at the least.
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Oh yeah, I'm aware. I usually do more than what I did here when it comes to weight gain - it's one of my favorite things to do, it's just that by the time I got to that point, I honestly didn't really feel like writing a whole lot else. Plus I just kind of liked the idea of her not really ending up with a whole lot for such an accomplishment. It'll definitely play into the ideas I have for a follow-up.
Posted by Schrodinger123 4 years ago Report
Aight
Posted by blazeveritas 4 years ago Report
absolutely fantastic noriko is my fave I have a huge crush on her
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Aw, it's always great to give someone a bit more of their favorite!
Posted by blazeveritas 4 years ago Report
I would love more
Posted by Kiritaba 4 years ago Report
Well, I do have some ideas for a follow-up to this. I'm not fully ready to commit to it yet, but it's definitely in the pipeline.