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My first ever story!
I'd certainly recommend any of my commissions over this trash, but I'll certainly appreciate anyone who gives it a read :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Hmmm trapped in the belly of a snake with someone I love, what an enticing scenario <3
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Thanks again for the editing pass, I really appreciated it!
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Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
No problem at all, it was fun to read and edit~
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Posted by DuskyDiapers 4 years ago Report
Love it! Such a cute and sexy story!
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I really appreciate it, and hope you're having a merry Christmas!
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Posted by NightRoller 4 years ago Report
"Lily squeed loudly"
Somehow I can't get it out of my mind that this is a comical combination of squealing and peeing at the same time out of sheer excitement.
Not bad at all, it's interesting to hear how Grace convinces herself to eventually go all the way with her lover. It felt like it ended a little early, but not an altogether bad place to stop, either; it works.
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Thanks NightRoller, I probably could have continued it to digestion, but I felt the rest of the story fit a lighter mood and I wanted to end on a romantic high note :)
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Posted by NightRoller 4 years ago Report
It fits that intention quite well, for sure!
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Posted by corrbear 4 years ago Report
Love couples vore!
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Posted by corrbear 4 years ago Report
Love couples vore!
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I really wanted to capture some romance in this one :)
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