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Christmas Gift By heromc -- Report

My first ever story!

I'd certainly recommend any of my commissions over this trash, but I'll certainly appreciate anyone who gives it a read :)

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BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

Hmmm trapped in the belly of a snake with someone I love, what an enticing scenario <3

heromc

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Thanks again for the editing pass, I really appreciated it!

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report

No problem at all, it was fun to read and edit~

DuskyDiapers

Posted by DuskyDiapers 1 year ago Report

Love it! Such a cute and sexy story!

heromc

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I really appreciate it, and hope you're having a merry Christmas!

NightRoller

Posted by NightRoller 1 year ago Report

"Lily squeed loudly"
Somehow I can't get it out of my mind that this is a comical combination of squealing and peeing at the same time out of sheer excitement.
Not bad at all, it's interesting to hear how Grace convinces herself to eventually go all the way with her lover. It felt like it ended a little early, but not an altogether bad place to stop, either; it works.

heromc

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Thanks NightRoller, I probably could have continued it to digestion, but I felt the rest of the story fit a lighter mood and I wanted to end on a romantic high note :)

NightRoller

Posted by NightRoller 1 year ago Report

It fits that intention quite well, for sure!

corrbear

Posted by corrbear 1 year ago Report

Love couples vore!

corrbear

Posted by corrbear 1 year ago Report

Love couples vore!

heromc

Posted by heromc 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I really wanted to capture some romance in this one :)