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Tags: Angered Pred angered prey attempted murder Attempted Vore bigots Biting bone breaking Burned skin burnt body Cruel Pred cruel predator cruelty crying prey dark theme evil pred F/F Failed Vore Female Pred Female Prey female victim hateful pred Human Pred Human/Naga implied fatal Implied Fatality injured prey Intense Lamia larger prey light blood Naga Naga girl Naga Prey Racism racist pred Rescue Rescued Prey sadistic pred sadistic predator Smaller Pred/Larger Prey smaller prey Struggling prey suffering tearing skin torture Trauma Unwilling Prey Warning
No this does not get real world political, just vore fantasy world political in concept
I've mentioned that arachne and naga's are generally hated in this world (despite nagas being my go to race oops) but I really wanted to go deeper into that and with this one I did.
Yes I know taur tends to stand for a half human being with four legs but I could think of no better term so I settled for taur. The races are split into four categories.
-Humanoid being anything that has no extra features, just four normal limbs head, elvs dwarvs and orcs fall into this catagory.
-demi being stuff like harpies, bunnies, ect and the most common anything that is mostly human but will have animal traits depending on their species like animal ear, wings instead of arms, tails ect.
-taurs anything that's more 50/50 like mermaids arachne and nagas. They always have the lower half of an animal regardless of leg count.
-and lastly undead any race can be an undead.
Names were chosen as such
-Lam for lamia, a greek gueen turned snake vampire that tears out her eyes and eats babies (why I refuse to call my nagas lamias)
-circe greek goddess/demi goddess in some versions of magic, really liked turning men into pigs.
-Hera Lamia's tormentor in greek mythology who cursed her.
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Posted by EnderDracolich 4 years ago Report
Very intense story, but well written!
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
thank you. I wanted to do some world building and show that not all vore of the world is willing or pleasant and that the world itself has it's own issues.
By the way it commented twice for some reason.
Posted by EnderDracolich 4 years ago Report
That's totally valid. I'm a bit more inclined toward willing vore myself, but you write unwilling vore quite well too.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
oh most of this series and what I do in general is willing but this was a departure.
This is part of an anthology series set in the same world where vore is common and beloved
Posted by EnderDracolich 4 years ago Report
Oh? I might have to check your other stories out then, willing vore is more up my alley.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
most of my stuff is willing so you won't be lacking for stuff to find though a large chunk of it is fate fanfic related. But at the top of this is a day in a world of vore. If you click on that you will find a bunch of one offs set in this world though far more cute and less torturous for the prey
Posted by thequietmanno1 4 years ago Report
ouch, hope there's something that can help her fix her tail up
that was a fairly intense experience for the both of them
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
Ya I wanted this to be dark compared to most of my stuff from this series. I've had a few moments of dark themes like implied domestic abuse, implied racism and the like but this was the first time it's front and center showing a darkness to the world that until now has only been minor or implied.
As for her tail, That's more left up to the reader but I personally prefer to think it's to late, it just adds that extra layer of despair for Lam.
Posted by PickingRoses 4 years ago Report
Good gosh, what a story. Your descriptions of the entire scene was so astoundingly raw, I really felt for poor Lam!
Posted by anxiousvampire 3 years ago Report
Nervous is happy to hear you liked it. any time he can make you feel for a character like this is job well done for him. sorry he didn't reply himself.
Posted by NagaRelic 1 year ago Report
Glad i stumbled onto thos story,it has some good story telling and does make me woner how the pairs story goes
Posted by IddlerItaler 1 year ago Report
I like this story. What you did with the worldbuilding is pretty cool and original; it turns the tables on the classic setup where lamias are predators by having one be prey, and it turns the tables again by having the prey get rescued.
As for the description, I've also wondered what terms could be used for non-human species as I don't really like the term "Monster Girl" - not sure if I agree on lamias counting as "taurs", but I can see it. Personally I'd classify lamias as scaley/scalekin, arachnes as bugfolk and mermaids as seafolk, looking more at their inspiration's overall group than at the body type per se.