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So a little refs, Palo is 5'0" but tells everyone they're 5'2". Bastardbot is 8'7".
So hey whats up gamers long time weirdo first time poster. I went a little bonkers lol. A big issue is that I've written primarily fanfic in the past so I have this uncontrollable need to be verbose and set up backstory, which is why it takes me 9 pages to get to the point. But I mean like before that there's a bunch of chasey taunty content so maybe that's good? I dunno. Be nice my heart is made of marshmallows and cotton.
Uhhh...I got definitely haunted by Mecho's slimy mawshots and the concept of Predator's and Atlaspred's droids however I've never actually engaged with DBH so I just kinda went 'uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh' and did whatever.
Overall this is a self indulgent armful of words that I slammed down on my two days off. If one (1) other person likes it then i can die happy.
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Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report
You know, I'm starting to think that Forge wasn't being very nice. Polite sure, but the whole stalking and eating business was quite mean if you think about it.
Posted by apackofindexcards 4 years ago Report
why would u say that yr gonna hurt his feeling with these unsubstantiated accusations ; n ;
Posted by VoidInVoid 4 years ago Report
After reading part two, he seems a bit more nice if a little smug (if you ask me). By the way, for putting most of your worldbuilding upfront, you did it in such a way that it wasn't like getting hit by a bus full of historians.
Posted by apackofindexcards 4 years ago Report
smug & secretly kinda nice bastards give me life
also thank you thats an amazing visual, the worldbuilding being Too Much was one of my biggest worries about posting this im glad its not completely alienating
Posted by Lahyte 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the amazing fanfics, I've loved every one and how you built this universe. If only there were more, a whole horde of fanfics building on this idea and sibling universes.
Posted by apackofindexcards 3 years ago Report
thank you, im so glad you enjoy em! :> i intend to write more at some point, i just gotta find time and the headspace, yknow?
Posted by Norju 2 years ago Report
I’m in absolute love with this story so far, everything from the world setting to the fact the main character is a non-binary and it all just keyboard slams my serotonin lol
Thank you for writing this and I hope you can continue!
Posted by apackofindexcards 2 years ago Report
thank you! i'm so glad my lil nonbeanie oc is appreciated, it means a lot <3 i fully intend to continue, i do still have more thoughts and opinions about these guys :>