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Benny (a mouse) is offered a final request by the philanthropic vixen, Rayne before she eats him. Not wishing to die a virgin, he asks for sex and she, much to his surprise, obliges.
Vignette that became a short story largely because I kept wanting to add more erotic stuff in. Also was fun to flesh Rayne out a bit more as a character.
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Posted by Kasra 4 years ago Report
Rayne really is a neat character! And seems to have found a different solution to Vana in the argument of "sex OR food, not both."
Really nicely done.
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Vana's a fun character but I like to write others that approach the same issue differently.
Posted by fappler 4 years ago Report
Great job! Always glad to see new stories from you
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I hope you keep reading them.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 4 years ago Report
I enjoy her character. Pleasant, well mannered, thoughtful (within the context). The sort of... calm acceptance that this is a very bad day for her dinner, and she can take a moment or two, to indulge a last wish. I always find that line, between the empathy of the eater, and the sharp reality that, they do need to eat, a fascinating thing to wrap my head around. You always walk that line very well.
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
I was unsure how to write her for a long while. Originally planned to have her only pretend to be nice to prey, but that seemed boring so then I got to thinking about what she would be like if she actually was sincere about it. I have a lot of fun coming up with scenarios for her.
Posted by brent5333 4 years ago Report
Love the story. Do you ever consider doing more detail from inside the belly. Also will you be making another series like These Messages. That is one of my favorite stories I read.
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
Thank you. I typically operate close to the "realistic" side so that prey wouldn't last very long enough to notice much beyond being bounced around a squishy sack. However, if you want a detailed account of a prey going through someone I might suggest a Good Catch which is a bit longer. It might hurt me as a vore writer, but I also write a lot for macro furry communities and not everyone is that into vore. As for TM, I am happy to say that I am working on another story right now very close to it but it runs on the longer side so it'll be a while before I finish it.