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Friendly Rivalry (Part 4) By MidNightOwlArt -- Report

This is a Commission from  lllll1337
I did NOT write the story but i came up with the story giving a few ideas here and there but He did most of the work and I can’t be any happier with the results!
all credit goes to him for this amazing story!
please go check out his written works  lllll1337

Part 1: https://aryion.com/g4/view/669933
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/669971
Part 3: https://aryion.com/g4/view/669977
Part 4: HERE


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This story is directly based on the Pokemon anime, ending on the episode “Strategy with a Smile” go check out the story on Wikipedia to follow along with the story as this will reference many things from that episode.

The crowd cheers for coordinator Dawn as she defeats May for the Wallace Cup gaining her a new coveted Aqua Ribbon! Making her the happiest trainer around, Though May is glad to see Dawn so happy she did not except her defeat too well she chase after Dawn and Ash before they leave challenging her to a full team Pokemon battle, but it looks like Dawn ask to have a “special condition” to her battle with May.

The winner vores the loser, shenanigans ensue!

/\————The tags are all together so look at what you like before reading.—————/\

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i do not own the characters they are own by GAMEFREAK.

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TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

oratleast​halfo​fherself.Herupperbodyisfullyvisiblewithinthemirror’sframe,

What happened here? Gave it a re-read, and seems like something messed up

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 3 years ago Report

ThankYouForLettingMeKnowItWasVeryHelpful XD

But really though thanks i didn’t read any of these when i posted them so thank you.
Assuming you read all chapters did you see any other mistakes like that? Or was this the only one that had that mistake?

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report

Oh I didn't look it all over again - but I'm sure it's fine. I can take a look if you want?
Also, if you don't remember, I'm the person who left that massive wall of text when part 4 was first released on lllll1337's profile x3

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 3 years ago Report

Dang i really should of looked over these part 3 got lots of mistakes apparently.

Ahh your thumbnail is different so I couldn’t recognize you lol.

Anyways thanks for pointing out the mistakes i’ll change them now.

And for those that have read this i’m sorry iI didn’t know this happened when i post it so forgive me.