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This story takes place after both Voremance, and Voremance: Snack Break. The idea for this story spun out of a scene I had in mind for the first story where Tracy would return as an antagonist, but the idea kept expanding in my mind until I realized I had to put all those scenes aside or I might never actually finish the first story.
Just like the last two it's also based on an anime trope. This time I don't think it has a name though. It's that thing that happens in action anime where a bunch of badass assassins come after the main characters, then the good guys have to defeat them all in sequential order of least tough to most tough.
Also, this story has made me into a liar because I said Voremance would probably stay the longest story I've ever written for a while, and less than two months later this new story tops it at 30 thousand words.
I hope you enjoy reading it as much I enjoyed writing it.
Trigger warnings: There is some light sexual assault in Chapter 3. There is a fair bit of emotional turmoil, mostly in Chapter 4, feelings of helplessness and inadequacy. And a cruel/indifferent parent in Chapter 5.
To find out what happens next to the happy couple you can read Voremance: Vignettes.
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Posted by einerjar 4 years ago Report
I see someone watches DBZA.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
I did say it was anime inspired :D
Posted by einerjar 4 years ago Report
I don't usually expect Abridged versions when people say that. Regardless, I'm interested to read the rest of these. The hidden laxatives' were a clever idea.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
DBZA is better than DBZ, fight me! Haha.
There's actually several more references and easter eggs for things I like (Not just DBZA) across all three stories, but you're the first person to spot one, well done!
And thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, I hope you'll let me know what you think of the rest of it.
Posted by bartek21 4 years ago Report
Wow! I really liked it. Please continue writing this story.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
Thank you! You really want more?
I'd be lying if I said I didn't have some more ideas for these two. But I think I will at least take a break before writing more of them.
Posted by HungryAL 4 years ago Report
Yes! More!
Also, I loved the anal focus in the first part, is there anyway more could go back to something like that? This felt very oral focused, that's all~
But yes, magnificent, I'd love to read more of this.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
Yeah, I realized that same thing about half-way through writing it, so I threw in the one anal scene during Chapter 3 so it wouldn't be 100% oral. It just felt natural that all these different predators would probably be using oral as a means of taking their prey by force, but I definitely know what you're talking about.
Anal, Oral, and unbirth are all possibilities for the future of this series.
Posted by TheWatcher 4 years ago Report
I'd like to see more toilet flushing stuff from you, if you're looking for input - I liked what I saw in Proud of Her Poop as well.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
Yeah, that is a favorite of mine but I've never written it explicitly for some reason: in Proud of Her Poop I just closed the door and heavily implied it, and in this story I decided that human beings weren't quite stretchy enough for it to happen.
Funnily enough, when I wrote the scene that involved the toilet in this story it inspired a different scene to fully form in my mind, I wrote it down, but it had no place in this story so there was never a chance I would use it here. It's a scene involving Amy and this same main character far in the future after they've graduated. It does not directly feature vore or toilet flushing but it is directly adjacent to both of those things, and is pretty kinky in my opinion.
That scene is fully written, but I haven't figured out what to do with it yet. It's not long enough to be a story, so I thought maybe I'd release it on my blog, but I'm also considering trying to work into a future story at some point.
Posted by TheWatcher 4 years ago Report
I'll admit I'm pretty curious as to what you mean by "directly adjacent". I'd be interested to see the piece when you feel like posting it, along with any other similar pieces you might invent.
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
Assuming I don't die or become physically paralyzed (knock on wood), I can promise that it'll see the light of day probably within the next few months, regardless of the form it takes.
Posted by Rat_Guy 3 years ago Report
Well, it's up now. Chapter 4 of my new story, Voremance: Vignettes
Posted by TheWatcher 3 years ago Report
Very nicely-written piece, sir, not to mention the impressive length... Though you've only further convinced me that you would write a killer flush scene if you were so inclined. :p
Posted by Rat_Guy 3 years ago Report
Thanks very much. And I'm sure I'll write one some day, even if I don't have any current plans.
Posted by Egriverany32 4 years ago Report
I would love maybe a alternate to this where one gets devoured and digested and the other runs and gets caught later
Posted by coldwar368 4 years ago Report
God I love this story so much. The characters the actions all of it is just really good
Posted by Rat_Guy 4 years ago Report
Wow! Thank you so much! You just made my day!
Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report
This is great, just wish we got to see what Amy left in the gym
Posted by Rat_Guy 3 years ago Report
I thought it was cuter if I didn't show it. But I thought about writing a scene where they read in the school newspaper or school website about it being discovered and the gym having to be shut down for a few days for cleaning.
Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report
Could be a fun college memory~
Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report
Crazy to this someone as this much talent in writing such a long, well written vore story! Definitely up their in my favourites! Great work. If only you could pitch this to Netflix and get bank hahahaha somewhere in an alternate universe:)
Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report
I dream of a world where we see vore in media as often as we see more commonly accepted fetishes like BDSM or feet.
Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report
Would be interesting:)