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Hey hey hey people. Surprise surprise! Bet you didn't think I was still alive huh? I'm putting this story out because I thought the idea was fun. Also I'm having trouble finishing so many of my other stories so its nice to get something out. Fingers crossed for VU4 soon as its almost done. But anyway, about the story:
It is on the shorter side at I believe 9k words but I still think its worth a read. All you get to know without reading it is that it takes place in a world with regular humans like us and tinies! (Wow Likey! You're so original!) Thanks I know! My love for odd scenarios and macro/micro vore is on clear display in this one.
Please don't hesitate to leave a comment! I love hearing your thoughts! Wanna tell me how much you love it? Wanna tell me how fucking stupid the story is? Please, be my guest! I love talking about story ideas too so feel free to leave a comment or message me. Hopefully I can provide you guys with a story you like!
Cheers!
Edit: If someone wants to write a short little disposal scene for this story. Be my guest ;)
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Posted by GGO 4 years ago Report
Great job, I loved it! Tinies belong in bellies!
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Thanks! Bellies are where Tinies belong!
Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report
I loved this, please continue to make them.
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the kind comment! Ah, I want to make more but I've been very unhappy with a lot of my work recently. A lot of unfinished stories. Hopefully something hits me in the head to reset me lol.
Posted by Coolerer 4 years ago Report
Bystander apathy in its brightest. Story is as good written as always too
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Thanks dude! I kinda just wrote this one impulsively so glad some people like it. If one person enjoys it, I'm happy!
Posted by MCPB 4 years ago Report
Live this story! Reminded me of https://www.youtube.com/embed/ChevXpoCXuU
Posted by MCPB 4 years ago Report
Lol, love of course^^
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Awesome! Makes me happy that you love it! And I'm not gonna pretend like I don't know that video lol...
Posted by hatter 4 years ago Report
Love the setting and the idea of a pred who just sorta doesn't care. Hard to believe she'd make that offer to his dad when she's so stuffed though, I mean the least he can do is wait for her to free up some room right? But yeah making that kinda teasing plausible is hard as hell I feel ya :)
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment Hatter! Yeah feel like this scenario needed a bit more thinking about... kinda just wrote this all at once cause I thought it was fun.
Posted by SawmillThrill 4 years ago Report
I love a good impulsive story. The pred is super fun! Carson up against 25 hot dogs in her belly was a very effective image...actually I found myself enjoying the process of imagining a lot of the scenes in this one. Welcome back. :)
Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report
Mia is pretty fun. Feel like I could do more with her character. She seems like the kind of person who'd be open to "messing" with Tinies again. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by ShamefulInterest 3 years ago Report
Great story!
The whole setting and context was rather refreshing and I really enjoyed reading this!
I also like how you detailed Mia's mindset.
Though, I think your walking a very-thin line with her pred mind set should be careful!
As a lot of people tend to over do the "Willingness" preds and turning more them into endless voids to fill with void over actual characters!
But I'd love to see more of her! specially having another more tiny to impress Philip or another "accident" like this.
I am a little sad this lacked small little disposal scene but mostly because I was pretty interested in seeing Mia's reaction the whole thing.
Though I saw you mentioned someone else can write one up, hopefully someone will.
Anyway, keep at it! bring us some more awesome stuff!
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Thanks! This story was pretty impulsive, maybe I should have put a bit more thought into it, but oh well. Mia is definitely a fun character but we'll see if I ever decide to revisit her. At this point in time I don't see myself coming back to her. This story is meant to be a short glimpse into a world that has Tinies and the character development is minimal. But who knows I seem to change my mind a lot. The disposal scene seemed pointless in this case to me but I know some really love those so like I did mention, if someone wants to add one, i'd love to read it lol. Cheers
Posted by ShamefulInterest 3 years ago Report
That's fair enough.
I've been reading some of your other works and I am really loving them.
I'm a huge sucker for vore story an *Actual* story.
Your making me jealous, as a writer myself I have tons of ideas like this but lack the direction or will to get them on the page >.>
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yeah I love these sorts of stories when they try add a cohesive narrative with interesting characters throughout. It's my goal to try do that but I feel like its a mixed bag with my stories.
If you have ideas, i'd strongly recommend giving it a shot to try finish a story! Motivation/Lack of inspiration is tough but amazing things can happens once pen is to paper.
Posted by ShamefulInterest 3 years ago Report
Thanks! we'll see about that.
Till then I've been helping a small indie team with writing their visual vore novel, so I'm not entirely useless! If you'd like to go check It It's on forums called "Shervon's project"
Even If I I'm not credited yet.
(at the time of writing.)
*Grumbles*
Posted by Luxio512 2 years ago Report
Gotta be honest, I would REALLY like to read a story like this one, but with the genders reversed.
I know I know, I'm just a unicorn.
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
I'm sure there is plenty of people who would wanna see that version. Writing can be fun if you got an idea you love :p
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
Spent a lot of time looking for this one. Its a classic
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
Glad you think its worth calling it a classic. Debatable but I appreciate the kind gesture! Thanks!
Posted by kbDArt 2 years ago Report
This fun, unaware, then callous voring was a good story. I enjoyed the read. The only thing I might quibble with was the wearing of clothes - maybe he should have stripped off the greasy clothes as a means of escaping her plate (less slippery, perhaps).
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
Perhaps... perhaps...