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Hello there. The little story above I wrote for fun yesterday. I had a writers block going on with my "REAL" stories so I challenged myself to write a quick story in 30 minutes. The above is the result, I just wrote the first thing that came to mind. I of course spent like over an hour after that fixing the grammer/spelling mistakes and adding the comment flavour text below. (2k word story btw)
It's dressed as a reddit post and is heavily inspired by: https://www.reddit.com/r/offmychest/comments/ksp8sg/my_sister_ate_my_hamster/
This story isn't for everyone because its got a hamster prey (again sighhhhh I know I'm suuuper lame) but I'm sure somebody out there will fancy it. I promise to try my best to get back to finishing all the massively long unfinished macro/mirco human prey stories that sit collecting dust on my computer.
Here is a reference for the pred: https://imgur.com/a/wRWvCR8
If you are wondering, yes I do prefer preds with more 'normal' sized features but I was feeling this one for this story.
Last but not least, I only uploaded this because BitesizedAmy convinced me to. I was not going to upload this at all. So if you do end up enjoying it, make sure you thank her because she is the sole reason this is here lol.
Always open to feedback, cheeeers!
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Posted by SnakeEyes 3 years ago Report
Damn I really liked that! I love when vore scenarios have this realism to it, especially with the sister struggling to swallow the hamster down
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by BitesizedAmy 3 years ago Report
Yay! I really love this story, it was too good to not share :)
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
:)
Posted by Choco0 3 years ago Report
Agreed
Posted by backoos 3 years ago Report
Great story! There are so few GOOD RL vore stories on this site with human preds!
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yeah I agree, there are far too few RL vore stories with human preds. Its a real shame, wish more writers would be into writing such stories. Its an underrated story genre for sure...
Thanks for the kind words!
Posted by akinata 3 years ago Report
i agree with other comments hee. it is a good vore story involving real life elements.
i guess the story you got inspiration from helped :)
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yeah that little story was on my mind. I feel like its a fake story but it still caused a spark in me. Cheers!
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
Really liked the format of this and thank you BitesizedAmy for getting this uploaded!
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Its definitely an odd format and fun too. Cheers!
Posted by Himmi1999 3 years ago Report
You are honestly my favorite writer on here. You pay attention to detail, write convincingly & make it always feel real & exciting while often also frightening. Keep up the great work.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Thanks Himmi, means a lot! Hope to see you around for future stories!
Posted by Choco0 3 years ago Report
One of your best stories with The Overly Inspirational Sister. Original concept too.
Please continue (and yay for feral prey!)
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
One of my best eh? Interesting. Thanks for the kind comment and yeah I hope to see more 'realistic' feral prey on this site in the future!
Posted by Base54 3 years ago Report
I love the Reddit aesthetic to it all. I've been listening to a lot of r/nosleep, so this was definitely a welcome surprise.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yeah it was pretty fun to put the Reddit aesthetic together. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report
Damn, can't believe I missed this story :D
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
It's a bit of a silly and short one, surely its easy to miss lol