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This is a story I commissioned from thewillingwombprey and they did amazingly
https://aryion.com/g4/user/WillingWombPrey
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Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
great story though im kinda surprised that the guy didn't fight back. like its not as if they had the strength to actually subdue him. if he hadn't tried talking to the psychos he would've escaped
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Its a kinda too shocked to move kinda thing, like a deer in headlights but i suppose he probably should have XD
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
yup now like a deer in headlights he's pretty much dead .
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Well not dead first they'll be babies then start life anew and if hes unlucky someone else will get their hands on him
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Seems like the ladies didn’t actually think their plan through . And given the way this story goes he’s probably gonna get the unlucky or unhappy version .
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
What do you mean they didn't think it through? Besides he wont exactly remember this, who knows they might be good parents
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
You mean they completely destroyed his memories and personality ? The reason I said they didn’t think it through is simple . Regardless of how they raise him when the time comes to talk about his birth , he’s going to ask a lot of questions and then Boom . Relationship ruined . And if he gets unbirthed again then will they even care ?
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Memories yes personality no and they might just say they got a doner as for caring id say they would but thats just my take on what happens after
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
Well if he kept his personality then he’s definitely not going to love them.
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
? He wont remember what happened to him they'd just be his mothers and if his mothers take care and care for him even if his personality doesn't change he would still love them
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
not really think about it . his personality stayed the same .he was clearly upset by losing his sisters and the whole process of essentially dying. the moment he finds out what they did hed hate them or condemn them for their crimes.especially since they do this to people who they deem struggling and not people who are actually struggling
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Hmmm i suppose thats true, he wouldn't exactly be happy to find out that happened to him i guess it all comes down to if he finds out. Dont think i ever thought of it that way
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
plus even if he still loved them . I'm certain hed berate them forthis . because its clear that they are kinda crazy and don't actually know who is struggling and who is happy .
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Huh you make some good points, ill have to experiment with tyat sometime. I like Unwilling prey but a wholesome or trying to do good twist might be interesting
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
unwilling and wholesome is awesome . only reason I said anything was because the ladies seemed a lot more crazy than wholesome. had he actually been struggling it would've made sense
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Im glad you mentioned this, if i come back to this idea i hope you will tell me what you think
Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
awesome
Posted by elliotalien08 4 years ago Report
Though im glad you liked it