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A long, strange story about a guy who starts a relationship with a rubbery, kangaroo-like drone. A non-vore version of this story with a longer ending exists and will probably show up elsewhere. Comment asking for it if you're interested and I'll reply with a link when it's posted.
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Posted by ninth 3 years ago Report
Nicely done
Posted by silvercatboy 3 years ago Report
This is super interesting! I definitely would enjoy reading the other ending.
Posted by Pokeman 3 years ago Report
I want to see it as well!
Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report
Here you go: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42274909/
Posted by Pokeman 3 years ago Report
very interesting. I'm actually kind of sad this is only a one shot, I'm genuinely curious what would happen next with these two. I mean, this isn't the sort of thing that a big shipping enterprise would generally take kindly to, I mean, it's generally uneconomical for your mindless robot to become functionally a conscious person. Eventually they are going to reach shore, and it probably isn't standard procedure for them to send the guy who just finished a 6 month journey isolated from all human contact strait back out on the same ship.
I am WAY too invested in the characters from this one off porn story. Proof you're an amazing writer, I guess. :P
Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42274909/ You'll note your concerns are largely addressed in this ending.
Posted by Pokeman 3 years ago Report
I would say less concerns and more a general desire for the story to continue, although I will say I expected it to go much less smoothly. :P Not a complaint at all, just subverted expectations.
Posted by Pokeman 3 years ago Report
Still would happily see more on these two, although I can see why you might not have more story ideas for them.
Posted by ArgobargSoup 3 years ago Report
...oh my *goodness* this is heckin' cute~
Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by hornywing 3 years ago Report
Again you have made a lovely couple that is both unconventional and compelling. I do want more of these two - it is so nice to have small romances like this.
Posted by marloweny 3 years ago Report
The other version gives an implication of forward trajectory: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42274909/
Posted by hornywing 3 years ago Report
I believe it is the better ending but I am biased towards happy endings. :)
And with a couple dozen sentences you create world I will daydream about for a bit. Your economy of words vs. the punch they carry is why I enjoy your works. Thank you again for sharing them.
Posted by squashflat 3 years ago Report
Very Very nice story, and yes i would be interested in reading the non vore version if you would be so kind.
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
How you consistently manage to make stories as adorably cute as you do while still including things like horny latex kangaroo robots is beyond me.
Posted by Ev0nix 3 years ago Report
Observe reality and travel away to parts unknown.