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Hi, so I'm sure nobody was expecting this but this is the original Vore University story but fixed up with added scenes.
I really didn't like all the mistakes in the original and wanted to quickly fix them and add some scenes that were really needed. Thank you to Ragnow for suggesting the extra scene near the end. Oh and I hope I got the majority of grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. There were A LOT more than I thought lol.
This "remaster" was made just for fun in one day. I do not plan on ever doing this again for any other story. Also, good news, Vore University Part 4 is done, it is just going through some intense proof reading so expect that soon! :3 cheers
edit: hmmm yes i do see i spelt remastered wrong in the thumbnail. oh well.
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Posted by theheadsn 3 years ago Report
nice addition. Really loved this story and "the greatest magician...ever?" fingers crossed you have some new stories in the future
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yup! You should see Vore University (Part 4) uploaded sometime next week. The story itself is written and done, it just needs some major proof-reading and scene adjustment to take place first. And then hopefully after that I can do some new fun standalones.
Posted by Animo24 3 years ago Report
Cant wait to see it i am really hyped
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Same with posting it. Unfortunately some issues came up with the proofreading... so its delayed for now :/
Posted by Animo24 3 years ago Report
Thats sad but i am willing to wait for another great story
Posted by Ragnow 3 years ago Report
Ooh, that was a VERY pleasant surprise to see hit my inbox.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Hopefully it somewhat meets expectations lol
Posted by Ragnow 3 years ago Report
It definitely met and exceeded my expectations, it was great and I'm looking forward to the release of part 4!
Posted by TinyHunter 3 years ago Report
Such a huge improvement over the original! And I liked that one too.
I was skeptical about you doing this, but the extra scene made it more than worth it.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Well at least one person is into it so that makes me taking my day to write it worth it lol. Trust me I'm super against re-writing old stories but this one felt like it needed some touch ups. It was my first story so I treated it as an exception. :)
Posted by Animo24 3 years ago Report
I love your storys and after reading it a 100 times it was a really big surprise that you uploaded a remastered version and its soooo good thank you
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
100 times!? I wouldn't give this little story that much credit! But of course thank you for the kind comment. I hope to continue writing stories for the foreseeable future!
Posted by Animo24 3 years ago Report
i read a lot of your stories very often i love the way you write them even if there is always something missing personally. but to find someone who writes exactly as you imagine it would probably be a miracle xD
Posted by MouseBoy 3 years ago Report
Fantastic story, love when preds trick prey down their throats
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Same. Especially when that pred is a hot girl! Cheers dude.
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
Its an instant favorite and somehow better knowing what happens. Fucking A+
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
I like to leave certain things to the readers imagination but I think the added scene helps this story out. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
I actually didn't get that far until today, and yeah its nice
Posted by Hozomat 3 years ago Report
Oh yes. THAT scene became extra spicy for sure. :D
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Some would say it wasn't spicy enough... but I think it did the job :)
Posted by dcvfgb1234 3 years ago Report
Really lovely remaster.
Really liked the new scene.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Felt like I never gave the original story enough love, and this is my apology to it. Thanks again!
Posted by Himmi1999 3 years ago Report
I had not had this much fun reading anyones storys ever since vyatich left...
Thank you as always.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Not sure who Vyatich is but I guess ill have to investigate! And thank you for reading my stories!
Posted by Himmi1999 3 years ago Report
Vyatich used to be one of the best writers on here but left with all her storys... You can still find them using wayback machine but not all but her writings were great... She had that talent of being super detailed while also making you feel the stories and the characters... Sth. not many have but I consider you one of these writers.
Posted by xvx17 2 years ago Report
that's so sad, my favorite writer on this page stopped uploading stories a long time ago, but at least his old stories are still there
Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report
Damn, poor Jessie, I kinda liked her, she was pretty cool.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Yeah, I agree. She was pretty chill.
Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report
While I'm just as big of a fan of these type of stories as everyone, moments like these, kinda makes me hate it, if you know what I mean :D
Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 years ago Report
I.... I need a picture of Emma now. For reasons!
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
I do have a real person she is visually based off of but for the sake of all the readers I've chosen to not reveal who this irl person is.
I think its better that way? Where the reader can develop their own 'perfect' vision of how Emma looks.
Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 years ago Report
Yes I agree that's better. Usually I really prefer stories and my own imagination too. But the way you described her was so movie like, that I wanted to see it.
If you wanna tell me I'd be happy. Public or DM I don't mind... Very curios to find out who your pred crush is!
Also, I enjoyed this story.
Posted by iliketoread 3 years ago Report
Probably gonna keep who it is to myself. I dunno, doesn't feel right sharing it. Sorry about that.
Posted by xvx17 2 years ago Report
In the first installment when I finished reading I felt like I had cut a piece of the story. In this version it seems that this piece was recovered.
I like that you have taken into account many of the criticisms of the readers.
The story is very good, details like the giant carrot, and how Jessie slowly approaches her destiny without realizing it, or how Jack decides to unleash his fantasies by sacrificing his friend.
I think there was only one thing that I didn't like, but it's something more personal. It made me uncomfortable that Ralph or the biology teacher were present in the vore scenes. I felt that Ralph was somewhat unnecessary, but the professor fulfilled his function. I don't know if that's why you decided for the professor to keep his eyes closed or to leave without realizing what had happened. But I think it was a good decision that it didn't interfere with what was going on.
Anyway, I'll be reading your other stories, I like the way you write.
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
Thanks for taking the time to write the comment. Yeah the scene has some silly parts like the prof closing his eyes but I think it gets the job done. Alright for my first story I would think.
Cheers!
Posted by Kaidprey 2 years ago Report
I love this. The size difference isn't a large as I usually prefer but I still can't stop re-reading it.
Even when I know what's coming it still holds the same suspense and will she/won't she moments...
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
Yeah I am a sucker for the size difference used in the story... can't really enjoy much other sizes (with reason) :p
Very happy to hear you love it, I originally wrote this story as my appreciation to the broader vore community. I want to give back for all the other great content I've gotten to look at and read from others.
Cheers!
Posted by Drakovyr 2 years ago Report
That size difference is definitely the best for me too !
Too small and it doesn't feel significant,too big and it feels too unrealistic, when the prey is just big enough to make the pred struggle to pass it down is just perfect :D
I love your work so much, and that story is with no doubt one of my favs !
I keep rereading it regularly, and it's always a blast, hope you'll bless us with some more of your talent <3
Posted by iliketoread 2 years ago Report
Glad someone understands my love for "just-the-right-size" preys LOL. I've always had the same feeling about a tiny being too small as pointless and too big is a bit difficult to believe (I also selfishly dont like the idea of ruining the 'normal' figure of the pred...)
Thanks for the kind words! I hope to write possibly a story or two this year.
Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report
Honestly, this was one of the stories that inspired me to start writing myself. Everything about this one is absolutely perfect. The detail, the build up, the sense of dread that permeates through the sequence is just too good. I model a lot of my ideas around how you present yours.
Excellent work, along with the rest of your stuff. Cheers, my friend.
Posted by iliketoread 11 months ago Report
I started posting on this website in the hopes of inspiring others to write so I'm glad it worked! All the feedback over the years really has come down to showing that I peaked at the first story I posted lol.
Thanks for the kind comment!
Posted by DocClamor 11 months ago Report
Nah, don't say that! You do excellent work on the regular, I just occasionally browse back through and felt I should comment, that's all. The Greatest Magician... Ever? is honestly a contender for being one of my favorites of yours. Underrated premise and a willing but "unaware" pred committing in front of crowd was something I particularly enjoyed. I mean it when I say you do excellent work. I'm sure the best has yet to come.