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It's not unusual for Queen Thema to eat her servants, but she might've gone a bit too far this time...
(Hoo boy, this one's over 10k words! It's like 25 pages, seriously.)
A commission for Chugly! If you want to commission a story, shoot me a PM!
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Posted by Magaso 3 years ago Report
Was kinda hoping she would UB her fellow noodle, but this was hot too
Posted by ThatGuySigma 3 years ago Report
As much as Sabah would've liked that, I think she's pretty happy with where she ended up, haha.
Posted by Chugly 3 years ago Report
What a read! You were able to cram so much fantastic action into this story, I wasn’t sure what to expect next.
Posted by ThatGuySigma 3 years ago Report
Glad you liked it dude! I appreciate you giving me so much free reign on this, really let me try a lot of fun ideas.
Posted by VincentShadowScale 3 years ago Report
that was a good-sized feast~
Posted by ThatGuySigma 3 years ago Report
Oh yeah, she's gonna have to take a day after all that.
Posted by VincentShadowScale 3 years ago Report
I need to take a day to devour a few hundred cute servants sometime -3-
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
ok but like... i kinda wanted to see the entire digestive process... or maybe get to see whats going on inside the queen lol
Posted by ThatGuySigma 3 years ago Report
Unfortunately I'm pretty shit at writing digestion lol, but the commissioner wanted the Queen's prey to stick around for a while anyway.
> see whats going on inside the Queen
A lot of fucking, probably. Like a LOT of it. Like almost too much.
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
dude youre not bad at writing digestion, you just need to find your style. that's why you get people who have their prey blackout, some do melty , others do crushing,... its all a matter of preference
Posted by EloquentOrc 3 years ago Report
Monster girls having a vorgy in hot baths. It is like someone read my wish list for a story. ;) So yeah, loved it.
Only wish there had been a few more servant on servant encounters. But that is not as much a criticism as much as it is just me being greedy for more. :)