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This thing took too long... I need to start obeying my rules on length of monthly post... it''s double it's intended size... oh well...
The exciting moment... where a mouse would attempt to vanquish a lion, an adventurer would challenge a god... some slightly more gruesome concepts in this one, but I think done lightly enough it shouldn't offend the overwhelming majority of sensibilities...
Also please forgive the working title, I struggle with these ones..
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Posted by sharky 3 years ago Report
well worth the wait my friend
Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report
Wow! That was a wonderful read. Could feel the tension from the very beginning, and the way it ended... whew! Epic.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear a sense of tension was achieved ^^; It's always impossible to know how it will be read
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
I'm glad to hear a sense of tension was achieved ^^; It's always impossible to know how it will be read
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Ooh, very nice. But it seems like the end of the games entirely and the mouse community...an animal control sort of thing, a mouse that hurts a cat will be destroyed. The repercussions could be pretty bad for everybody..