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So... this finishes out the adventure of Newton, into the depths of Billy's game, where mice must fight a... dragon? Believe it or not, originally, this chapter ends where I intended the last chapter to end... given both ended up being 9k words, I... don't know what I was thinking
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Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Matthew does seem nice enough, sincere enough. But man, talk about your pyrrhic victories.
Do love the logic behind it all, though.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
Glad you're finding something to like.
Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report
Oooooh I'm interested in how Newton's plan will unfold.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
Well, I intend to keep going till I feel his story is at it's end, wouldn't want to spoil how long away that may be, or how it ends
Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report
The way you're telling Newton's story now, you can easily skip to the end after the whole "Billy arc", then fill it with stuff in-between whenever you're feeling like you wanna contribute to the series :P
Though seeing his journey unfold chronologically is always nice.
...I miss Chandra and Zorian though.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
I do keep meaning to do more with those two, but I've only got a few ideas for them...
Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report
I think you can still churn out a few more XDDD
Ideas that have popped up in my mind before would be... let's see... maybe some dragon obsessed guy who wants to devote himself to Zorian? Doubt he'll live but it'll be surprising if he does. Or... someone willingly being eaten by Chandra, since we know she's craving the taste of human on her tongue. Could even throw in her getting an illness and someone deciding to literally become her medicine pill XD