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Hotel food is good... By Remnant5000 -- Report

New story, trying something different: POVs. This time, a hungry woman gets the best food the hotel can offer: a busty waitress.

It's my first time with POVs and with making this sort of stories narrating in present, tell me what you think about it.

Alternate continuation (neutral ending): https://aryion.com/g4/view/717661

Alternate continuation (good ending + non-canon bad ending): https://aryion.com/g4/view/718364

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scallion

Posted by scallion 3 years ago Report

This was so good!

Remnant5000

Posted by Remnant5000 3 years ago Report

Thanks!

Dudebro2092

Posted by Dudebro2092 3 years ago Report

Another great story! I hope you are inspired to follow this up, I'd love to hear more of "her" eating or being eaten by someone!

Remnant5000

Posted by Remnant5000 3 years ago Report

Stay tuned then...

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

Wow, nice story, I enjoyed this one. The waitress must have been really good : )

Remnant5000

Posted by Remnant5000 3 years ago Report

Thnak you!! Yes, she must have been tasty af xd