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Long awaited part 2 to this little vore tale involving Hana Uzaki, her mother and her younger sister as the true, monstrous owner of the quaint, sea-side beach house they'd rented reveals itself. Not one of them will escape. Each one will be devoured. Whole. Alive. One after the other. And there's nuthin' they can do about it.
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Posted by PerilStories2020 3 years ago Report
Oh gosh, this was absolutely great!
I know I sound like a broken record but your skill at writing straight horror is nothing short of impeccable. You describe the monster so vividly and disgustingly, and the way it hides the bones of it's victims through-ought it's lair and in the house itself is chilling (special credit to the skull that it seems to use to taunt Hana before and after eating her mother). Also really love how you depict the beastie's intelligence - not humanlike at all but still a clearly smart creature, particularly how it cleans and repairs the house once it's meal is finished.
I also really enjoy the way you abruptly shift gears to comedy, like when we go from the horrific image of Hana being forced to watch her little sister's body being dragged beneath the floorboards to the traumatized girl having to listen to her mother gloat about how she's still able to fit into her high school swimsuit. I think it gives the whole thing a surreal feel that really fits Hana's perspective on the nightmare that has befallen her family.
And the vore scenes themselves are just lovely! The way you blend the visuals of soft vore with the clear gory implications of what happens once the girl is swallowed is just not something I've seen any other author do nearly as well as you. It manages to keep the horrific aspects of the girls being eaten while still being extremely sexy, and I love it!
I enjoy how each of the three girls were subjected to each of the three main vore positions -- headfirst, assfirst, and feetfirst. Hard to say which is my favorite -- I'm very much a headfirst guy and Yanagi has that going for her, but the other two Uzaki ladies each have such well-written scenes that I genuinely can't choose.
I particularly like the switch back to the monster's perspective as it slurps down Hana -- I may have mentioned it before but I enjoy inserting as the pred so it's wonderful to see it's perspective as it savors it's delicious, sexy, buxom treat.
All in all, an absolutely wonderful story! A great way to mark your return to writing.
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Very much appreciated, my friend. Your comments are always a huge encouragement and I am glad you enjoyed the story. I hope to keep the content coming now that I'm back in writing shape so stay tuned!
Posted by Dracoshippuden961 11 months ago Report
It was a pleasant read. I admit I got confused at the end.
The Pred was 10/10 I just loved it.
Tsuki Uzaki is, in my opinion, a much better prey than her daughters. So the part where she started getting swallowed was my favorite.