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Outnumbered, outflanked and with nothing but his wits and the insatiable appetite of his loyal Rock Drake Foe-Eatah to aid him, the imperiled warlord Kallo Sunderskull must fight his way through the sprung trap of a Druchii ambush and the bolts and daggers of dozens of wicked, bloodthirsty witch-elves. Will he escape? Will he finally learn the truth as to the nature of his strange, emerald affliction and its connection to the decades old conspiracy that has shaped his life? Find out in this long, action packed addition to the Sisters of Avelorn! Spoiler alert - some elf ladies are about to get ATE!!
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Posted by Simplespectator 3 years ago Report
……well. That was awsome. Not sure what else to say. I was super invested. I hope the next part comes swiftly. But if not, I’ll wait. I know it will be worth it. Thank you kindly.
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Aye, I'll definitely try to be more prompt with the next chapter, took me way too long. Thank you for the kind words, I am glad you enjoyed!
Posted by EnglishGamer 3 years ago Report
Oh wow that was worth the wait.
I chuckled at Kallow basically catapaulting a Dark Elf to his Rock Drake.
Can't wait for the next chapter to come, question is, is his Drake going to save him or are his forces that destroyed the Asur in chapter 3 going to save him. Or maybe even Taldeer.
Keep up the good work and cannot wait for chapter 6.
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
First draft had Kallo bellowing a "YEET!!!" as he tomahawked the Druchii lady into the drake's mouth but I decided that he probably wasn't up on his meme lingo.
Thanks for your kind words of encouragement, they're a huge boost for me! I hope to get chapter 6 out a bit quicker this time around for sure.
Posted by EnglishGamer 3 years ago Report
Always nice to come back to this series. Can't wait to see what Voreish wonders you grace us with.
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Just saw chapter 6 pop up, and thought: 'wait, I thought 5 was next', and then realized I'd missed chapter 5. I need really to pay better attention, I guess.
So yeah: Good stuff! As always, fantastic work on the descriptive language, and action in particular. And the vore-sequences remain a huge treat as well, naturally. The Rock Drake does get all the ladies, doesn't he? xD
And the continuing plot is also very much riveting. Interesting to see more of Kallo's background, and very curious to see how current events play out, since Mr. Sunderskull certainly seems to have gotten himself into a bind. It seems unlikely for his story to end there, but how he could get out of this one, I can't speculate.
Great work, and I'll definitely read Chapter 6 as soon as I get the chance!
Posted by Narrows 3 years ago Report
Thank you my friend, it's always a huge boost to read your feedback! And yes, during talks for this chapter the Rock Drake's lawyer made it clear that his client get to devour at least three lithe and oily lady dark elves. I think it turned out for the best. Look forward to see what you think of chapter 6, hope it tickles your fancy!
Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report
Well, sorry the feedback was so (ridiculously) late this time, but better late than never, I guess!
Yeah, but methinks the Rock Drake forgot to read the fine print about the possible soporific side-effects of those oily elf-ladies. xD