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What was meant to be a short detour becomes a small adventure as Ben and Riley find themselves caught up in mage politics.
The shift-brace was an idea I've had for awhile, but could never find a good story for. Fortunately, the use of a more unusual city like Sorterra provided a good opportunity to try it out.
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Posted by Wolfsage 3 years ago Report
Oh, I wasn't expecting a new chapter already
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Lmao so first you make mention of the fact you hadn’t updated the storyline in 2 months . Then you drop them into a society of slightly less sexist ( than the rest of the world ) mages . And still have time to introduce a great fight scene . I like it lol
Posted by Nuenshi 3 years ago Report
The 2 months thing was a complete coincidence, I swear. Glad you liked it!
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Your Riley the ravenous stories are comparable to that of ACES and VoidinVoid , I always love these lol
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
Sonya joins the party! Nice
Posted by shortprey20 3 years ago Report
Nuenshi youve done it again! A wonderful tale and a story i am thoroughly enjoying! Looking forward to what comes next for our three travellers and the wonderful adventures that come next!
I think you have done such a good job aa the characters feel like life and have their own personality and mindset about things!