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The sole survivor of a shipwreck, Emily encounters Eidothea, a hungry whalemaid looking for an evening snack. Faced with such a formidable creature, Emily tries to talk her way out of the situation, and later, out of Eidothea's belly...
This is a pretty short, straightforward RP written by myself and Emily_Preygirl. In editing it, I departed from my normal style of handling dialogue because there's so much of it (and so many reactions and descriptions tied to it) that having a paragraph break every time a new piece of dialogue started would have bogged things down to an incredible extent. Do let me know if that worked well.
BTW, if you see anything I missed while editing and proofreading, please let me know. I was fortunate in that both my partner and I are quite strong writers, and I went over this twice, but I've been in a mentally poor/low energy state this week and worry that I may have missed some stuff, especially with how dense these paragraphs got.
Note: you may encounter weird formatting quirks while reading this story (namely, unaccountable spaces between letters/punctuation, and inserted or deleted empty lines). I upload as Word documents so people on mobile can read my submissions, but that means Eka's likes to screw with my formatting. I've fixed what I can; please just try to read past the rest.
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Posted by KyngSama 3 years ago Report
This was very well written-I much enjoyed the read!
Posted by Mechdragon1k 3 years ago Report
A detailed and creative story with good byplay between pred and prey. Wonderful.
Posted by TETRO 3 years ago Report
That was really good, especially the disposal teasing. There's something particularly sexy to me about prey knowing her fate and picturing the excretion of her own remains in her head.
Posted by HeinousSaurus 3 years ago Report
Thanks! My partner really took the idea of Emily seeing previous meals in the stomach and ran with it; very pleased with how it turned out.
Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report
God damn I love your stuff.
Posted by HeinousSaurus 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I hope you'll continue to enjoy what I put out.
Posted by bigboy1992 3 years ago Report
So far this is definitely my favorite pred. Hoping she comes back in another story. Maybe she could eat the crew of a ship who end up giving her some powerful indigestion.
Posted by HeinousSaurus 3 years ago Report
She likely will, though not sure about the ship. It's a good idea, and one I've suggested to some of my partners, but only time will tell.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I do like the ship idea, the idea of a crew trying to keep a ship floating in the belly seems cool.
Posted by grz01 3 years ago Report
wow - that's brutal, but hot at the same time!
Posted by HeinousSaurus 3 years ago Report
Definitely what I was going for; a lot of this RP focused on the inconsequentiality of Emily in the face of Eidothea's hunger, and contrasting her brutal, terrible experience with Eidothea's "it was a tuesday" attitude was very fun to play through.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I kind of want to see a story just like this where the prey makes the full tour. I love the busy stomach, the prey watching other pretty digest and coughing the prey up partially digested.
Posted by HeinousSaurus 1 year ago Report
Full tour isn't generally my thing, but I can see the appeal. Perhaps as a story where one indigestible character has to see all her friends get mulched?
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I love that concept. I am really excited by your thinking of the story.
There are a few stories that do it but not enough.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/191450 A bad day does it,
https://aryion.com/g4/view/467453 Full circle kind of does it, warning I think the prey might be underage. No sex through, should I even post links to these things?
Both of the below are basically ntr by Vore.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/736051 World worst Cupid
https://aryion.com/g4/view/524816 Dragon mistess and serving girl
Posted by HeinousSaurus 1 year ago Report
I appreciate you sharing these works with me. I'll certainly look over them once I have a bit of time.