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Tags: 2nd Person ambiguous prey Burp Burping Endosoma F/reader F/You Female Pred Food in stomach Head First messy stomach Monster motherly pred Non-fatal Oral Vore Permanent Entrapment POV Prey POV Protective Pred Reader is Prey Reader POV Safekeeping Same Size Semi-willing Toriel toriel pred Undertale Unwilling Prey Unwilling to Willing prey Vore story voretober voretober 2021 Willing Pred writing
After snatching up the latest human to fall into the underground, Toriel takes drastic measures to make sure they'll never, ever leave...
Day 1 of Voretober is here, and today’s prompt is “Tale.”
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Posted by Flocas 3 years ago Report
I don't know what it is about overprotective endo preds and unwilling prey, but I love it when the two mesh.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I don't blame you! It's a very, very good combination, and it's kind of rare to find.
Posted by Flocas 3 years ago Report
yeh
Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report
I agree completely~
Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report
Oooh~ If you're doing a writing challange, then this will be a very good month~
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Hehe thank you, that's so nice of you to say!
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
A good entry, Lives! I do like the idea of a motherly pred trying to keep someone they care about safe, no matter what that someone's view is!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! And you can call me Dulce :>
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Off to a strong start with goat mom, she really does make a good pred
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Yes, she really does.~ Thank you for reading and commenting.
Posted by Undernom 3 years ago Report
This is so cozy! Great stuff!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much!!
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Yes, all of my love for this.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!!
Posted by MidoriHime 3 years ago Report
Congrats on finishing the first story of Voretober! Unfortunately I can't read it right now, but I'll look forward to it when I get the chance later tonight.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Ahh thank you so much! And no worries haha, take your time. Are you still planning on participating as well?
Posted by MidoriHime 3 years ago Report
I do still plan on participating! I might have to skip a day here or there (I've already decided to skip Day 1 due to various reasons), but I'm doing my best to hit as many days as I can. I've actually already got my story for Day 2 underway as we speak~
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Ahh! I am really looking forward to it!!
Posted by LegitUsername 3 years ago Report
Never was big on Undertale or Deltarune, but I do enjoy your writing~! Good work with this!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by FitMe 3 years ago Report
You have no idea how excited I am to see you doing a Halloween event. A story from you every day? This is more like Christmas!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Hehehe thank you. I only hope I don't disappoint!
Posted by Darian 3 years ago Report
Never enough gentle unwilling entrapment. Never enough... hope to see more of it!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I agree, it is a very good trope! Maybe I will write more about it some day :>
Posted by Undrgrnd831 3 years ago Report
Toriel sounds like a truly lovely home to live in. I'm sure they'll get used to it eventually.
Posted by Undrgrnd831 3 years ago Report
I don't know if you've ever considered any similar themes of entrapment with something like cock vore or anal vore instead, but I'd love to see you tackle that topic :p
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I've definitely considered it, but unfortunately I'm not really interested in those vore types. I'll never say never, though.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Yes I definitely agree!! I... totally don't have a pred crush on Toriel, or anything ><
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
Like the Minecraft mod Draconic Evolution said so well...
It's the start of something big...
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I don't know of this Minecraft mod... but I hope this is a compliment! ^^;
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
Oh trust me, it's a compliment for sure haha
Posted by booleanTrue 3 years ago Report
I normally don't care for endo stuff but you really made this enjoyable. I like that the POV character ("you") doesn't immediately come around to the idea of being forced to live inside of a stomach. It's still smelly and slimy and gross and *shouldn't* be safe but here they are anyway.
I'm also a sucker for when anyone writes Toriel doing something crass or vulgar when it's so against her usual character. Her response is always so endearing (and hot if I'm being honest). Great little story you got here. Thanks for sharing it!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Hey, thanks a bunch!! It means a lot that you were still able to enjoy my story despite not being a fan of endo. I do like representing endo with more realistic slimy and messy stomachs, since that's a rare side to endo that contrasts the usually fluffy stuff (even though I love both approaches).
You know, I remember reading your Undertale stories before I even made an Eka's Portal account, I probably read them like a dozen times!! It was a treat hearing from you. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. <3
Posted by booleanTrue 3 years ago Report
Well thank you very much in turn! It always lifts me up to hear people get so much enjoyment out of a thing I made (even if it's smut lmao). Thank you really!
Posted by ItsSongxing 3 years ago Report
Well, I'd caught a glimpse of your stories in the feed as I worked through Voretober myself, and seeing such strong reception in the comments makes me think I've got something to learn from you. Chapter 2 of Deltarune seems to have fully reignited my interest in Toby Fox's stuff, so Toriel is a welcome start.
Endo isn't usually my thing, but this was really cute! It suits Tori's character well, and you have a good sense of how to address all the reader's senses. I wonder if Toriel eats some food with the wrapper to give her guest something less spit-covered? She is a goat, after all. Looking forward to checking out the rest!
(Sorry for any spelling mistakes, by the way - mobile Eka's is giving me a transparent textbox so I can't see what I'm typing.)
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Ah hello!! I had seen your Voretober stories pop up as well! Though if you say you're not a fan of Endo stuff... well, a majority of the stories I wrote for Voretober involve Endo in some fashion! Make of that what you will. There are still a handful of stories involving digestion though.
But thank you for the compliment! With POV stories like this, I try to involve lots of sensory detail. I definitely think Toriel would still try to be as motherly as possible, so preparing homemade meals and sealing them in wrappers and plastic containers before promptly swallowing them definitely sounds like something she'd do.
(The transparent text box is concerning... it makes me think there might be something wrong with my custom theme, yet I'm also typing my comment on mobile and my text box is fine. Who knows...!)
Posted by Asstral123 2 years ago Report
It would be great to see a second part although with that ending I don't think it will happen.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 2 years ago Report
Who knows? I could totally write a second part. Just a matter of having the time/motivation.