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This a very belated (month and 10 days late) birthday present for my pal SmaxTheDestroyer. When I asked him what he wanted this year, he presented a picture of a super crowned Ridley and suggested a story around that. I decided to forgo the Super Crown in favor of a more Metroid: Other M style evolution of a cloned Samus into the monstrous Ridmus. This is like the opposite end of the vore spectrum compared to the story I wrote for him last year, A Night With Samus, which was wholesome and romantic, while this is filled with terror and sadism. Some of us enjoy a wide range when it comes to our vore, so I decided to reference last year's story by spinning it's title for this years story.
Posted by Simplespectator 3 years ago Report
Better move fast Ridmus. Gotta catch samus before dread happens…
Nice story. I liked it well enough. Thank you kindly.
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Posted by derpsquid42 3 years ago Report
You know, this is completely in character for the GF. At this point I think they might have been behind Kraid's appearance in Dread...
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report
They have a bad tendency to create their own destruction. If it weren't for Samus, they probably would have wiped themselves out by now... They probably did either capture or clone Kraid for some reason. They cloned Ridley for goddesses' know why reason.
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Posted by narutowolfie12 3 years ago Report
Any chance you know where to find that picture at? Amazing story btw, like seriously loved it
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report
It was sent to me, so I don't know unfortunately. Glad you enjoyed the story though!
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 3 years ago Report
Thank you for this gift
ZeldaNoVorsu this was hot as hell~ I particularly enjoyed the metamorphosis and the Wilhelm scream gag. That was classic!
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report
You're welcome~ I'm glad you enjoyed my spin on this. And of course their needed to be a Wilhelm Scream. Every great sci-fi story has at least one.
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Posted by Matanuiv 3 years ago Report
Every member of the Helmm family seems to die screaming. A curse on the family, or a law of reality?
Another excellent read. Sequel, please?
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report
It's curse on any member of the family named or nicknamed some form of "Will". Otherwise, they die in varied manners like every other family.
Glad you enjoyed it. I don't know about a sequel, but never say never I suppose.
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Posted by The K 3 years ago Report
Wow! So much belching in this one. Great read. I especially like how you described how her gut was a round orb with a diameter equal to the distance between the bottom of her breasts and the middle of her knees. Lol I loved reading that.
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Posted by ZeldaNoVorsu 3 years ago Report
Lots of meals means lots of big burps. That description was me trying to really establish a good mental image for the size of her round, swollen belch factory.
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