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Cheating and Eating By LivesInAStomach -- Report

Natalie the school bully has finally digested her classmate. And now that she knows how good it feels... she'll most definitely do it again.

Day 16 of Voretober is here, and today’s prompt is “Cheat.”

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Reader beware: Cruel predator alert! Tread with caution.

This is a direct sequel to Picking On Someone Her Own Size, which I was very surprised to see accumulate an absurd amount of favorites and views, a good deal more than my usual Voretober average. So, I consider this story born from popular demand.

I'm not usually one for cruel stories (or even stories with digestion, most of the time), but I'm using this challenge to tackle plots I might have never thought about otherwise. My future stories will probably cover more light hearted topics, though!

(Edit: This story now has a sequel, click here to read it!)

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Miushima

Posted by Miushima 2 years ago Report

Not surprised the last Natalie story got lots of love - everybody loves a hungry bully <3

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 2 years ago Report

Yes, apparently lots of people do! It surprised me... but hey, I'll never complain about positive attention. ^^ Thank you for commenting.

FitMe

Posted by FitMe 2 years ago Report

Even if it's outside your usual repertoire, you write cruel stuff very well! I'm a sucker for it!

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 2 years ago Report

Well thank you very much for the kind words! I'm glad you've been enjoying it.

MetalSlime

Posted by MetalSlime 2 years ago Report

Natalie getting some kind of comeuppance would be fun to read

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 2 years ago Report

Hmm... that's a good idea, actually. The wheels in my brain are turning...

ClosetedTiny

Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report

Seems like someone else was thinking alike me.

Raesetsu

Posted by Raesetsu 2 years ago Report

I kinda wanna see her blossom into a professional predator:D

ClosetedTiny

Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report

What I did enjoy about this sequel was how well you handled the afterwards! With her having to go undercover in order to hid the fact, the reactions of those around her, the addiction...

I have an idea for Voretober 20: "Capture", if you catch my drift...

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 2 years ago Report

Thank you!! Yeah, I really wanted to have a detailed aftermath to show some of the consequences.

And yes... I have the exact idea as you, I'm most certainly catching your drift. Two missing students are bound to turn some heads...

Raesetsu

Posted by Raesetsu 2 years ago Report

I kinda wanna see her blossom into a man eater

lurker425

Posted by lurker425 1 year ago Report

It is a shame she digested Jenny.
I'll bet she could have convinced her to keep quiet real easy. Also, I'll bet Jenny would have agreed to be her belly pet/roommate without question.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

Unfortunately, I don't think Natalie is the type to keep her prey sticking around...

But! You make a good point... it might be interesting to write an "alternative ending" of sorts.

Jrrrobert

Posted by Jrrrobert 1 year ago Report

I love this. Bully preds and first-time preds (not that it'll be the last) are some of my favorite themes. I appreciate you combining them.

LivesInAStomach

Posted by LivesInAStomach 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed!