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Tags: Burp Burping Endosoma entrapment F/F Female Pred Female Prey Head First Human Pred Human Prey Non-fatal Oral Vore Permanent Entrapment post vore weight gain Post-Vore principal principal pred Principal/Student punishment Same Size school school setting Student student prey Tight Belly Unwilling Unwilling Prey Vore story voretober voretober 2021 Weight Gain writing
Natalie's first two mistakes were digesting two of her classmates. Her third and final mistake was thinking she could get away with it...
Day 20 of Voretober is here, and today’s prompt is “Capture.”
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Posted by 5thkazekage 3 years ago Report
Glad to see her get what's coming to her.
also just a heads up, I want to point out during the swallow sequence you accidentally wrote Juniper instead of I assume Veronica
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Ah! Thank you so much for catching that, how embarrassing. I was too sleepy while writing!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Sweet justice is so cathartic
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Natalie's right where she belongs. She probably won't be getting out of there anytime soon!
Posted by MetalSlime 3 years ago Report
Oh damn, a perfect end to this trilogy
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Very glad you think so!
Posted by bronzelara 3 years ago Report
Hot story just a shame Veronica didnt teach and encourage Natalies naughty hunger
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
xP perhaps, but I did want to maintain some shred of morality. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.
Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report
Damn, was kinda hoping she'd get to continue :(
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Ahaha I'm sorry, I did see your other comments hoping for a different outcome. That's just how the cookie crumbles
Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report
Aw man, you write digestion so well, and few artists do, that I almost feel robbed :sadge: kudos to you for keeping me captivated, even though I'm not a fan of safe vore. You're a good writer, and you tell your stories well.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
That is a very valuable compliment. I'm glad that you were able to enjoy my writing even despite your personal interests! Rest assured, I'll definitely be writing some other digestion stories in the future
Posted by Stulti 3 years ago Report
I do love a good endo ending >w> Good work!~
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you very much! Perhaps I'm biased, but I love a good endo ending as well.~
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
Yes! Yeeeeessssss!
Oh my goodness, this was the perfect ending!!! I loved the world building you included and that you decided to include Veronica piecing everything together instead of a "Oh, you have been caught!"
And you included a Belly Buddy! I love the world you have made over the 3 stories and potentially in the other stories that tie into this world you made! You have not spared any energy in these stories and I am soooo looking forward to the next 11 days!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I'm very glad you enjoyed it! I'm putting everything I have into writing all of these stories and maintaining some degree of quality. I'm glad it's evident.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
Do you write as a job? There really should be no reason why you are able to produce stories at this quality so consistently!
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Oh man, I wish. That's my dream career that I'm currently in school for. Right now, I'm just a hobbyist with lots of passion.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 3 years ago Report
A lot of passion!!! You should make a visual novel with your writing!
Would certainly be better than the one I am currently working on...
Posted by FitMe 3 years ago Report
I really, really love how you write entrapment. The preds are so confident and sure of themselves. Perfection.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Such high praise! Thank you so, so much... and to think I only wrote this in a couple of hours. I would love to dedicate the proper time and editing needed to craft a truly excellent entrapment story one day.
Posted by SD40 3 years ago Report
Good to see that idea I mentioned get a story! Great work. Also good to see Veronica come back into a story. Well done.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
I did really like your idea! And it's very reminiscent of the plays we used to do. I'm glad you enjoyed it.~
Posted by SD40 3 years ago Report
I'm glad you had fun with it, only 9 more days to go! You got this.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you, I'll try my best!!!
Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
Reminds me of the SCP FOUNDATION MOTTO LOL
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Hehe, I suppose so!
Posted by bellylov3rs 3 years ago Report
A lovely edition to the story though I hope we get to eventually see an alternate timeline where Nat gets to continue developing her predator abilities, maybe flip the script on the principal or something even.
And also a fun couple alt ideas, and alt of the first story where Veronica gets eaten by Jenny instead after a punch or shove goes wrong. And then being cared for by Veronica who takes Jenny under her wing. And either in this or another alt Veronica is the safe pred Jenny trusts and gets to experience safe vore with her sexy principal.
Posted by LivesInAStomach 3 years ago Report
Thank you for reading and commenting! And those are some interesting ideas. This trilogy of stories ended up being very popular with readers so I have a feeling I may return to these characters sooner rather than later. Alternate timelines seem to be the way to go, many possibilities there! I'm quite fond of that idea of Veronica kinda indulging Jenny's vore interests in a safe way... and also, you're not the only one who wants to see Natalie keep on eating folk, seems lots of people wanna see a story about that. ;p