Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

bruh , so he had a feature that if he died in game he died in real life. then rather than guarantee he reform and go out of his way to actually reform he lets his horny get him killed. to top it off rather than experience a long and fulfilling life in game he lets his mother flush away his existence .

this kinda reminds me of the story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/661458 except that story is more hopeless and cleary unwillingness for the dude while this one has dubious willingness and a slight chance of hope. granted the mother in both stories seems the same , cruel , selfish and seductive. which I gather was the intent of both commissions so good job

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Ooo I’ll have to give that a read! Horny tends to get one in plenty of trouble usually ^^; so glad you enjoyed it! Had a lot of fun writing this one <3

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

mother vore has never been my thing mostly because I've read oedipus rex and didn't like it . that said I can recognize a great story when I see one . though id much prefer a jess and anne story rather than with erin. i mostly find it curious that erin didn't simply make sure she wasn't flushed. she could've been a ghost in the game .but it is what it is lol

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

and definitely read the story if you liked this scenario, its much crueler but the victim doesn't die due to horny . just pure unfairness and cruelty lol

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Just finished and wow what a read! Really really enjoyed it and definitely see the similarities. Always love a cruel pred like that, taunting is also always a plus, that lullaby at the end <3

I think Erin was too lost in their lust and fantasy fulfillment to really care anymore, their mind too broken x3 thanks for the recommendation! Hope you continue to enjoy my work :3

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

i always will lol

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

<3

Posted by thicceater 3 years ago Report

holy fuuuuuck this was lovely <3

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much! So happy you liked it <3

Posted by Nazrax 3 years ago Report

Well that was a thing. One of the weirder stories ive gotten off too for sure.

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Haha well I’m glad it helped satisfy you ;3

Posted by hax 3 years ago Report

There's a typo in the earlier part about the mother and daughter doing to dungeon. "Slaid" is a word for a tool I think? "Slayed" is the past tense to "slay" as a verb for killing.

Posted by hax 3 years ago Report

Also, I think "she didn't really do you justice" works better than "he didn't really do you justice" for consistency with how Anne talks about Erin in the game and accepts her true self etc

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much for catching these, made the adjustments and reuploded! It is much appreciated. Hope you enjoyed it!

Posted by Autoreticule 3 years ago Report

Honestly perfect, loved every moment of it

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Thank you so so much, so happy to hear it <3 ^-^

Posted by cantstopwontstopfurry 3 years ago Report

holy shit this is like one of my most favorite stories in so long! the casual attitude, the incestual element, the dirty disposal, the teasing and taunting and the fatal surprise, ugh so good! ten outta ten <3

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much <3

Posted by KyleWaterdrop 3 years ago Report

Great Story! Had me hooked to the end. Poor Erin though, getting so horny, she dies.

Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much <3 at least they enjoyed going out x3

Posted by KyleWaterdrop 3 years ago Report

I wonder what would have happened if she survived.

Posted by Kandandy 2 years ago Report

Absolutely love this I keep re-reading it and *huff* I wish I could go out like that

Posted by PancakeBebop 2 years ago Report

Awwww thanks for the kind words :,3 I'm glad you enjoyed it, Dungeon Delvers is always accepting new players ;3

Posted by Kandandy 2 years ago Report

Hehe where do I sign up? XD

Posted by jasamprn 2 years ago Report

I've found myself coming back to this story like... every other month or so. I'm not even big of familaral stuff, but the whole setting, the concept of it is <3