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Aaron logs into his favorite MMORPG Dungeon Delvers to play with his mother Anne for the first time. Will it also be his last? ;3

A commission done for an anonymous friend ;3

Hope you enjoy ;3

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doomed

Posted by doomed 1 month ago Report

bruh , so he had a feature that if he died in game he died in real life. then rather than guarantee he reform and go out of his way to actually reform he lets his horny get him killed. to top it off rather than experience a long and fulfilling life in game he lets his mother flush away his existence .

this kinda reminds me of the story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/661458 except that story is more hopeless and cleary unwillingness for the dude while this one has dubious willingness and a slight chance of hope. granted the mother in both stories seems the same , cruel , selfish and seductive. which I gather was the intent of both commissions so good job

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Ooo I’ll have to give that a read! Horny tends to get one in plenty of trouble usually ^^; so glad you enjoyed it! Had a lot of fun writing this one <3

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 month ago Report

mother vore has never been my thing mostly because I've read oedipus rex and didn't like it . that said I can recognize a great story when I see one . though id much prefer a jess and anne story rather than with erin. i mostly find it curious that erin didn't simply make sure she wasn't flushed. she could've been a ghost in the game .but it is what it is lol

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 month ago Report

and definitely read the story if you liked this scenario, its much crueler but the victim doesn't die due to horny . just pure unfairness and cruelty lol

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Just finished and wow what a read! Really really enjoyed it and definitely see the similarities. Always love a cruel pred like that, taunting is also always a plus, that lullaby at the end <3

I think Erin was too lost in their lust and fantasy fulfillment to really care anymore, their mind too broken x3 thanks for the recommendation! Hope you continue to enjoy my work :3

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 month ago Report

i always will lol

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

<3

thicceater

Posted by thicceater 1 month ago Report

holy fuuuuuck this was lovely <3

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Thank you so much! So happy you liked it <3

Nazrax

Posted by Nazrax 1 month ago Report

Well that was a thing. One of the weirder stories ive gotten off too for sure.

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Haha well I’m glad it helped satisfy you ;3

hax

Posted by hax 1 month ago Report

There's a typo in the earlier part about the mother and daughter doing to dungeon. "Slaid" is a word for a tool I think? "Slayed" is the past tense to "slay" as a verb for killing.

hax

Posted by hax 1 month ago Report

Also, I think "she didn't really do you justice" works better than "he didn't really do you justice" for consistency with how Anne talks about Erin in the game and accepts her true self etc

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Thank you so much for catching these, made the adjustments and reuploded! It is much appreciated. Hope you enjoyed it!

Autoreticule

Posted by Autoreticule 1 month ago Report

Honestly perfect, loved every moment of it

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

Thank you so so much, so happy to hear it <3 ^-^

cantstopwontstopfurry

Posted by cantstopwontstopfurry 1 month ago Report

holy shit this is like one of my most favorite stories in so long! the casual attitude, the incestual element, the dirty disposal, the teasing and taunting and the fatal surprise, ugh so good! ten outta ten <3

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 1 month ago Report

I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much <3

Dillybar12345

Posted by Dillybar12345 4 weeks ago Report

Great Story! Had me hooked to the end. Poor Erin though, getting so horny, she dies.

PancakeBebop

Posted by PancakeBebop 4 weeks ago Report

Thank you so much <3 at least they enjoyed going out x3

Dillybar12345

Posted by Dillybar12345 4 weeks ago Report

I wonder what would have happened if she survived.