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For people just reading this. Its actually my forth story with Suzy. The other ones are, Cheat Day, Dangerous Eating Habits, and Halloween Party Problems. I should probably put them in a folder or something.
In this story Suzy recalls numerous incidents she has had with her diet, before finding out what might be the problem.
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Posted by NomNexus 3 years ago Report
Something tells me that it'll be impossible for Suzy.
Another lovely story! Though I would prefer for the words not to be crossed out.
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
me too trying to fix
Posted by NomNexus 3 years ago Report
Is Suzy the only monster girl in the city or no?
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
There are a few others, but it's mostly human.
Posted by NomNexus 3 years ago Report
I wonder if they're like Suzy?
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
haha I fixed it. Also knowing the town, probably.
Posted by Noeman 3 years ago Report
Best series from the best writer on the site
Tho alot of your other shits good cause it's got smut too w/out any weird shit like futa or whatever
Would be cool if it was added to this story
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
Thanks, Yea Suzy is trying, but its hard to find someone willing to date a centaur. Especially one as big as her.
Posted by Noeman 3 years ago Report
aw man
hope she does, the kinda wholesome mushy bits mixed in with the horrifying nature of the situations are the best part of your stuff
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
I like those parts too. Suzy's time will come.
Posted by VincentShadowScale 3 years ago Report
Always love the idea of a pred that eats so much that they affect the population.
Course now I'm imagining that as a result of her eating habits and the stupidity of the town, more and more people start to move in for cheap housing, causing the population to skyrocket, but also causing her to accidentally eat people constantly~
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
Suzy's waistline will forever be doomed.
Posted by hamletvalley 3 years ago Report
Loved it! That ending with her thinking about everyone else is great x3
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
It will be fine. Everything will be just fine. I'm sure Suzy will figure out a way to stop eating people. (no she won't)
Posted by algog8 3 years ago Report
Somehow I could see Suzy picking up some huge stadium cleaning job, getting stuck in the dark main entrance and falling asleep. Waking up to a gigantic crowd pushing their way in (to suzy's mouth) forcing in an unending stream of peeps.
Lets just say by the time it was over the stadium was filled to overflowing.
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
I feel like Suzy has had this exact scenario as a nightmare.
Posted by algog8 3 years ago Report
And you know what's even better? Being booked for cleaning central station on the next day.
Posted by SonOfDarkness 3 years ago Report
Yay, Suzy!
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
I feel the same way.
Posted by chuunda 3 years ago Report
Always love your stories, especially of Suzy, my man. Keep it up and hope you have a great day!
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
Nice, you have a good day too.
Posted by Znonymous 3 years ago Report
Thats fun stuff and hope she gets a date some time. Someone nice from out of town? Curious why all the locals keep falling into thhere date.
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
She's trying guys. its just been hard with exercise and work. She never has enough time. She still need to find a replacement for her "Missing" employees. it will happen though. She just has to find the right guy.
Posted by SonOfDarkness 3 years ago Report
Any chance we'll get to see in detail what happened at Slappy’s Water Park?
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
Oh god Slappy's. The water slide, people diving, even the lazy river. The whole place was a death trap. Sorry but what happens at Slappy's stays at Slappy's, and Suzy's dangerous filled septic tank.
Posted by Umhuebr 3 years ago Report
Suzy is fantastic! Poor her, trying so hard, these townsfolk just won't help her, will they?
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
I know, they're so rude. Why is it so hard for people to just not get eaten.
Posted by Becquerl 3 years ago Report
Narrator: It was not fine.
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
lol, this is correct.
Posted by supersaiyango 3 years ago Report
Now i really want to see the waterpark story
Posted by Crossbones6732 3 years ago Report
I love Suzy the Centauress, her using both her mouth and her ass to devour is amazing, and you describe her huge self so well, belching and farting from humans making her gassy, love it!
I can imagine how that trip to the water park must have gone, most likely involving her getting trapped at the bottom of the slide and a too eager crowd racing down to end up in HER bottom. Not sure if she can do this, but I could also imagine her drinking up a pool full of people to get rid of witnesses, becoming a whirlpool.
Curious, has Suzy ever eaten anything bigger than herself? And how many people has she eaten in one day, what’s her record?
Love your work, hope to see more!
Posted by babyhater 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the complements. Happy to hear more support for Suzy. Has she eaten things bigger than herself? Depends on your definition of bigger. Taller and longer yea, but that stopped happening after she moved to a mostly human town. As for the most she ever eaten... um well (Suzy appears with a menacing glare) p-probably not that many.
Posted by stilluncomfortable 2 months ago Report
Hope you come back to make more of these some day!
Posted by babyhater 2 months ago Report
I'll try.