I had completely forgotten the main reason for why I avoid using narrow lines these days, but once I had colorized my picture, I remember why: It looks as if the humans (which often are my most detailed or correctly colored objects) have been inserted with copy-past technique :(
At least, this is my opinion. I could probably also avoid this by using another pen than a mapping pen when I draw, but habits change slowly. Anyway, for my picture of the week, I decided to go for a fantasy creature, it has been some time since my previous one.

Please, leave me a comment and tell me what you think^^

Story…………………

Sarah rolled her eyes upon seeing her customer, a young woman clad in pink from top to bottom. She hadn’t caught her name, and probably had the blond bimbo not told her either, so Sarah’s brain christened her Barbie. Barbie had spent almost an hour in the huge store, looking at and trying on what Sarah thought to be hundreds of clothes and other articles. Unfortunately, being a shop employee also meant that Sarah at one point had to ask if the other woman needed help.

This was why, half an hour later, Sarah was waiting outside the changing room while Barbie tried on a new set of clothes, lingerie this time.

“No, this won’t do either!” Barbie said from the other side of the curtain. “The bra doesn’t look good and it press to hard on my, you know what…”

“Alright, try this one instead,” Sarah said and gave Barbie another set when her arm reached out from behind the curtain. “This brand has more frills and isn’t as tight, but it is still able to emphasis your Barb… ehm, chest!”

In contrast to the pale and air-headed blonde Barbie doll on high heels, Sarah didn’t look out of the ordinary, at least in her own opinion. Her height was average (with heels!), the hair that reached her shoulders was brown and slightly curly, and her skin Latina brown. Nor was her bust nearly as big as Barbie’s, just big enough to make her self- confidence when dating. But her uniform, which was similar to her colleagues’, made quite a few male shoppers turn their neck when she passed them; a knee long black shirt, red heels, black pantyhose and a white blouse.

Patience, a virtue she long since had learned, was why she still waited without complaining. Sooner or later, Barbie would either buy something or leave for another store.

Unfortunately, having a boring job with nothing exciting ever happening, not even a shoplifter as long as she had worked for the company, dulls your senses. That’s why Sarah failed to notice the ugly creature that slowly crept up to her from behind.

It was the scream from another customer that warned her. Having no idea why somebody would scream inside a cloth store (accompanying husbands’ screams of desperation sounded way different), Sarah spun around on her heels and stumbled backwards.

“What the fuck!!!” she yelled as she fell towards the changing room’s green curtain.

A huge, pinkish slug with a round pulsating maw, loomed over her. It had no visible eyes, and the toothless maw resembled a leaking tube from which gooey strings of saliva emerged.

“No, stay way from me!” Sarah said and waved her arms as she fell into the changing room where she was caught by Barbie’s arms.

“What is this all about?” asked the other woman who had stripped down to her panties.

“Get out of here, we must get….”

Sarah’s almost swallowed her tongue when the pink monster followed inside. “Shoo go away, there isn’t room for more people in her!”

Barbie who saw the creature first now, let out a shrilling scream and almost dropped Sarah in the process, but before that could happen, the slug lunged forward at an amazing speed!

The round maw opened even wider and enveloped their head and shoulders simultaneously. Sarah was twisted around as the undulating mouth pressed them together in an intimate embrace, Sarah on top and Barbie underneath.

“What in the world is that and what is happening?” Barbie shouted.

“I have no idea, but I can hardly breath, your boobs are blocking my mouth!” Sarah gasped as she desperately tried to free herself.

The slug jerked backwards, and as one, both women were sent deeper inside. Neither wanted to be eaten, so Sarah and Barbie put up a vigorous fight, trashing and wiggling with all their might to save themselves. This came to an abrupt end when the maw clenched down, squeezing them even tighter together, leaving only their lower halves able to continue the struggle as they lay crotch against crotch. Their shapely legs and firm thighs kicked and danced in thin air as they slowly but gradually were sucked inwards, never once stopping their descent. And as the process of devouring them alive continued, the two women were pressed tighter and tighter together.

Waves of slimy saliva rolled over them, lubricating Barbie’s nearly naked body and soaking Sarah’s uniform to her skin. Contracting muscles worked constantly to pull them inwards and press them down. The buttons on Sarah’s blouse gave in and popped out, leaving her moderate chest in direct contact with the ballooning pair underneath, which were far from the softest she had felt. Thankfully, the slug’s surrounding tissue was soft and spongy so it didn’t hurt being compressed with the woman, making Sarah think the whole ordeal would have felt like an erotic massage if it hadn’t been for their peril.

Gravity shifted and their head turned downwards, just as their legs were sucked into the mouth. There was also a tongue at work, and now it lapped at their buttocks, but whether it was to push them further inside, or if the giant invertebrate had a perverted brain, no one knew. The only thing certain was that the longer they waited for help, the closer they came to the stomach.

A final, powerful swallow, slurped down their feet, leaving both customer and shop employee as two wiggling bulges on the slug’s boneless body. The creature had not much of a brain to speak of, it simply ate what it liked and didn’t care much that one of its victims had a husband and a nice car waiting for her on the outside, or that the other one would miss the surprise party her family had planned for her 30-year birthday celebration the same night. Instead, both women would find themselves pressed tightly together in a tight and humid belly that kept them in constant motion as it kneaded them.

With both morsels securely tucked away in its bloated belly, the slug left the same way it came by following its slimy track. On its way past a terrified clerk that had hidden behind a cloth rack, it spat out Sarah’s red heels before exiting through a door that led to a huge outdoor storage area. No one knew where it came from or what it was, and if the police later hadn’t seen the recordings from the surveillance camera, they would never have believed the witnesses.

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