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Tess froze, horrified, watching a pair of flailing legs rapidly slip between encroaching lips, accompanied by a steady rhythm of gulps, an underpinning of muffled protests, and the faintest early groans. Each shift brought wayward limbs deeper, inches at a time, until those same lips had reached the ankles in the span of a few heartbeats.

Hello again. It's time for another short story. On the docket for today: a florist, a hopelessly crushing college student, and absolutely nothing that could possibly come between them.

Word count: 2.8k

Thanks to  Progressive for the proofreading.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 3 years ago Report

I take no responsibility for any errors.

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

I appreciate the vote of confidence.

threk

Posted by threk 3 years ago Report

Yaayy, happy ending! Not for Katelyn, but eh, probably deserved it.

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

Don't worry. She has the official authorial stamp of guilt-free death.

AlexBrymm

Posted by AlexBrymm 3 years ago Report

This is really fantastic, all I can say to the negative is that I wish more time was spent on those nice soothing tummy rubs. Besides that, everything else is brilliant! I've been following your work for a while and I really love all the wonderful twists and turns your stories tend to have, so I hope to keep seeing more!

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

Thank you! Shame Tess is a bit too shy here, but I'm sure I'll find an excuse for someone to indulge a bit more in a future story.

Anunnaki

Posted by Anunnaki 3 years ago Report

This is a really neat little vignette - it's flirty and awkward and fun without taking the focus away from the vore. I hope we get to see more of these characters!

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

Thanks! No promises on these characters in particular, but I've got some more fun stuff in the works.

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report

Cute :3

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

Thanks!