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“Can I help you?”
“You—” Liz sputtered. Shit, try again. “You ate… Kathy.” The accusation emerged more as a threadbare, scarcely intelligible gasp, but the lamia got the point.
Ruby lips spread into a wide grin. “Oh. That small thing in the restroom.” The lamia shifted her coils, laying a hand on what might be a bulge, only faintly visible in the dim light outside the club’s back entrance. “I believe we’re acquainted.”
Hello hello. For today's short: a college student ventures from her comfort zone and quickly finds herself in over her head.
This story is a prequel to Old Flames. If you haven't read the original, I'd actually recommend going through this one first, then checking out its predecessor.
Thank you to Progressive who lent both his editing skills and more than a bit of actual writing to get this thing done in a timely manner.
Word count comes out to just over 3.2k.
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Posted by Edddd 2 years ago Report
This is really good, its hard to describe, but you know something is well written, when you forget youre even reading at all and your mental cinema goes wild. So glad I stumbled upon this
Posted by thecheese01 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I appreciate the kind words.
Posted by Summerleaves 2 years ago Report
This is pretty good. I'll have to check out the prequel.
Posted by MagicOddEffect 2 years ago Report
Damn, that was some beautiful prose.
Posted by thecheese01 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I definitely indulged a bit with this one.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 2 years ago Report
Again, no idea how this flew under my radar. This is amazing. A fantastic prequel to an excellent story. Hope we see these two again!
Posted by FurryTastyTreat 1 year ago Report
It ends in such a frustrating yet perfect place. The characters and the story seem so real. Well done
Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
This was a great story, I loved it : )
It is well-written, not too long and not too short and has a bit of drama, excitement and erotic on top of the element of vore, the character are also very much enjoyable.
What I especially enjoyed was that Liz actually found Kathy's telephone with a message for help and saw her plight inside Ruby's coils, but was unable to help her in the end because Liz ended up doing something completely else instead ;P
Posted by nomnomvore 1 year ago Report
Okay this was actually pretty adorable, loved it! sucks for Kathy but I guess that is just the toss of the dice.
Posted by Sauvegarde 1 year ago Report
I've read somewhere that "sex" happens in the brain, but regarding Liz, so does digesting :p
Look at her, figuratively melting under a simple touch, she is adorable <3
Posted by gtgod 11 months ago Report
Great story!
Very well written
Posted by Nixthewitch 3 months ago Report
I felt that this one was cute! Please, consider making them a couple!