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Melissa goes on a date with Talia, the tattooed waitress. Everything goes pretty well... until it doesn't.

Finding herself in a fight for herself, Melissa makes a new discovery.

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(Fixed the status chart, cause I'm a stupid who forgot to add it.)

Well, this turned out longer than I expected. Well, I enjoyed writing it, so who cares?

Next part's gonna be fun, I'll tell ya that much.

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Plgc

Posted by Plgc 3 years ago Report

Hot damn! What a twist!

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Winny

Posted by Winny 3 years ago Report

Wonder if expensive hotels toilets can handle massive loads. :d

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Godeater

Posted by Godeater 3 years ago Report

By God that was a twist I did see coming great job.

Not sure about everyone else but I really hope Lindsay and melissa a thing together.

Can't wait to see where this goes from here.

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Skullhammer123

Posted by Skullhammer123 3 years ago Report

You know, to be honest, I thought i had the ending twist figured out, which I was right on, but that last line totally caught me off guard lol. Good Job!

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Megamorph1213

Posted by Megamorph1213 3 years ago Report

Rip Talia. I was looking forward to seeing more of her but I guess she set herself up for a downfall.

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kirche

Posted by kirche 3 years ago Report

Damn, this is fantastic writing.

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altmail108

Posted by altmail108 3 years ago Report

I saw you did some alternate endings of early stories. Any chance of an alternate to this one where Melissa gets eaten?

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 3 years ago Report

Alternate endings of VoreFans parts is definitely something that’s on the table for when I do alternate endings in the future.

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StormElla

Posted by StormElla 2 years ago Report

I'm a graveyard of nations is such a raw line

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voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 1 year ago Report

Never thought I’d be reading a great vore series like this set in Australia! I’m down in Vic

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