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A group of roommates have a house meeting to discuss the unexpected consequences of the pred/prey couple's constant trips to the reformer. Shelly just isn't quite who she used to be anymore...
A little piece of flash fiction to try to get back in the saddle. Some weird stuff i don't usually touch in this, its a lot darker than my average piece as well.
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Posted by TestAccountPleaseIgnore 3 years ago Report
"Kinda fucked up" indeed...
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
its fine because she's lost enough that she doesn't remember what she had now haha
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
Makes you wonder if she would just stop at Shelly
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
she'd probably just bask in having completely taken shelly for a while, but then give into the same urges that destroyed the last friend in an endless cycle of lust and regret.
Posted by Dustyotrail 3 years ago Report
Nice.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
<3
Posted by Aickavon12 3 years ago Report
pretty dark
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
yup, as advertised!
Posted by FutureBellyAche 3 years ago Report
This is a really interesting concept. Id love to see it expanded.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
yeah this is pretty much the only way i can get into reformation/nonfatal stuff. if there's no consequences it feels like there's no point lol
Posted by FutureBellyAche 3 years ago Report
I can relate. Nonfatal tends to not interest me unless theres some long term ramifications. Prey reforming back into the stomach or prey never leaving the preds body in general are they main ways i enjoy nonfatal.
Beaides that, stomach go grrrg.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
permanent entrapment is real good, ive kinda implied it in a few of my works but sometime i really have to buckle down and write the hell out of one.
Posted by Summerleaves 3 years ago Report
This is kinda like my relationship with college.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
haha i feel that
Posted by marceber 3 years ago Report
I never thought you would one up drugs and alcohol as the most dangerous thing in your stories. Real disturbing stuff.
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
i feel like vore should be dangerous! sometimes you gotta risk it all haha
Posted by theheadsn 3 years ago Report
Great read
Like that its open eneded, but would love a second part if you have it in you. Hell i love most of your work so Im happy to get what I get
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
might be able to do something else with karli, but without just retreading the same ground it might be a different kind of story. who knows, we'll see where motivation takes me! im glad you've enjoyed <3
Posted by JessTheNerd 3 years ago Report
Welp I'm now anti reforming
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
haha welcome to the club
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Aw now I'm sad :(
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
dont worry she gets better and they all laugh about this in a dennys while eating waffles
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
Ty now I feel better :)
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
<3
Posted by threk 3 years ago Report
Ahaha, I'll take it.
It's weird, I'm fine with digestion (most of the time) which is straight up death, permanent endo which can arguably be a fate worse than death, and I can even vibe with the sorts of mind death after being absorbed, all along the spectrum from displeased sentient fat "I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream", through coming to terms with being a bodypart and forgetting a past life, to the (ever so slightly more fetishy) end of being mindbroken by overwhelming pleasure/sensation. But, when the person suffers an identity death while they're still wandering around, basically having their memories and personality sucked out while to leave a hollow husk, that's the bizarrely-placed line in the sand where I start just feeling bad. Weird. Maybe because it's starting to get a little too real with the similarity to dementia? Dunno.
Ah well, still very well-written, I'll just keep the Denny's ending in mind :P
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
its definitely not for everyone, not even my bag all the time. sometimes i like dabbling with darker themes and exploring how to twist content im not really into something more interesting.
Posted by SleepySloth 3 years ago Report
Oh gosh this is just amazing. Are you going to make a story about what happens next?
Posted by Ohgra 3 years ago Report
nothing on the docket, but at the very least i might revisit the concept again in something else. glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Kelly 2 years ago Report
This is the fucked up stuff that there isnt enough out there ... Amazing story !
Posted by Ohgra 2 years ago Report
its niche for sure, gotta make the content you cant find haha
Posted by Kelly 2 years ago Report
I like this fatality even tho reformation exist basically that even in a world that "fixed" the problem there is still something lost when going through it and the sexual pleasure out of erasing the other person is just HHHHH
Posted by AlexanderTheGreat 2 years ago Report
To be fair, it's really Shelly's fault for not reading the fine print, those wavers ARE there for a reason after all...
Posted by Ohgra 2 years ago Report
true! lmao they are cheap for a reason