What Beachcomber doesn't know is she tries this sort of thing all the time. She just didn't tell him until she was successful. God knows what she'll extort out of him now that she won the bet. 83
It occurred to me that I have done very little female pred/female prey. Thus the recent stories and a pic I'm about to post. Callie was originally a prey fur but she picked up bad habits from Beachcomber and is now more predatory than he is.
I like the setting but...yeah asshole move. I don't wanna say it made Callie seem like..."date-rapey" since it's clearly not that serious level an offense, even to Deborah. But I guess it veered towards that to much to sour it a little.
Maybe I'm just looking to deep into the shallow end of the pool and working myself up.
My urge to write comes new goes. Right now I am trying to write two "X goes to the friendly beach" stories and struggling a bit. One visitor is one of my LAPD werewolves and the other is Rudy the anteater.
Posted by Amnael 3 years ago Report
Now that is some skill x3
and already set for the next snack ~
Posted by Strega 3 years ago Report
What Beachcomber doesn't know is she tries this sort of thing all the time. She just didn't tell him until she was successful. God knows what she'll extort out of him now that she won the bet. 83
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
I was hoping to see Callie get something to eat! Great work!
Posted by Strega 3 years ago Report
It occurred to me that I have done very little female pred/female prey. Thus the recent stories and a pic I'm about to post. Callie was originally a prey fur but she picked up bad habits from Beachcomber and is now more predatory than he is.
Posted by Ome 3 years ago Report
I like the setting but...yeah asshole move. I don't wanna say it made Callie seem like..."date-rapey" since it's clearly not that serious level an offense, even to Deborah. But I guess it veered towards that to much to sour it a little.
Maybe I'm just looking to deep into the shallow end of the pool and working myself up.
Posted by Strega 3 years ago Report
Yeah, this wasn't Callie's nicest moment. Going to a beach where people reform has inspired in her a tendency to try to cheat the system.
Posted by Ome 3 years ago Report
Still, its a fun enough series its almost got me wanting to write fanfic XD
Posted by Strega 3 years ago Report
My urge to write comes new goes. Right now I am trying to write two "X goes to the friendly beach" stories and struggling a bit. One visitor is one of my LAPD werewolves and the other is Rudy the anteater.
Posted by Ome 3 years ago Report
Well i'll look forward to them if they do happen. Setting is fun enough to read it got me to want to write again too!