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Tags: Absorption Age Difference ass expansion Belching Bones in scat Breast Expansion Casual pred Casual predator Casual vore Cruel Pred cruel predator cruelty Crush dehumanization Dehumanizing Prey Disposal dreams eating food with prey inside exercise F/F F/M Fatal Feet Female Pred Female Prey flirting foot crush Gloria Graphic digestion Humiliation lass long digestion Macro/Micro Male Prey milf pred mind break Multiple pred Npc pred Off-screen vore Pokemon pokemon sword and shield Pokemon Upset Post-Vore pred becomes prey prep/cooking Professor Sonia Same Size Scat Sexual content sonia taunting taunting pred teasing Teasing Pred Uncaring Observers Uncaring Pred Underage pred Underage prey Urination Weight Gain Young pred young prey
Summary: Gloria is going to start her new journey as a Pokemon trainer in the Galar region.
Word Count: 16,479
Disclaimer: There is an off-screen underage predator/underage prey scene. It’s very short and they show up twice. If you are bothered just skip the paragraph either youngster or schoolgirl shows up. You shouldn’t lose much in the story.
Author’s Note: This is a trade with Thor11, expect to see the other side of the trade shortly. They helped me a lot with crafting and editing this story, so make sure to go check out there gallery.
http://aryion.com/g4/user/Thor11
I was also quite smitten with the proposed idea of the story and I had similar stories in mind. Thus, this is the first story in a new Pokemon series. The "Pokemon Upset” Series.
Pokemon Upset Poll:
This is going to be a poll for what the pairing of the next Pokemon Upset story will be. This poll will be up for a while, as I probably won’t be able to start this story until June.
https://strawpoll.com/polls/40ZmdpmmKga
Future Stories:
So I’m producing stories of my own interest along with the winners of the delayed commission giveaway and trades. Here is the tentative schedule I have right now. In case my schedule changes, some items may be moved to a later date. Regardless, for those concerned with current trades or commission, the latest that your commission or trade should be completed is June 12th. If there are any RL changes, that will be communicated to the people that I’m working with on the stories.
April & May:
1. Fate/Grand Order Story
2. FFXIV Story (Commission)
3. Pokemon Mother’s Day Special (Hilda’s Mom & Hilda are the winners; poll is over)
4. Overwatch Story (Trade)
5. Fate/Grand Order Story (Commission)
June:
1. Non-franchise Story (Commission)
2. Genshin Impact Story (Commission)
3. Fate/Grand Order Father’s Day Special
4. Placeholder in case of Natural Disasters that would change the schedule.
Upset: the party expected to win (favorite), either loses or draws in a game with an underdog whom the majority expects to lose
Character References:
Gloria: https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/c/cd/Sword_Shield_Gloria.png
Mum/Gloria’s Mother: https://www.deviantart.com/vivivoovoo/art/Pokemon-Sword-and-Shield-Mother-820580034
Sonia: https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/3/3b/Sword_Shield_Sonia.png
Lass (Sword/Shield): https://www.deviantart.com/genzoman/art/Pokemon-Sword-and-Shield-Lass-788382354
Big Sis’ (Beauty): https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/1/14/XY_Beauty.png
Marnie: https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/3/30/Sword_Shield_Marnie.png
Schoolgirl: https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/7/7a/VSSchoolgirl_SwSh.png
Youngster: https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/5/56/VSYoungster_SwSh.png
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Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
What do you all think of the new series? Remember to vote on the poll for what pairing you want to see in the next Pokemon Upset Story this summer. Yea, look at my future stories schedule in the story description. It is going to take a while.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
So I noticed an issue with the poll where I made it such that you had to select all choices. It is fixed now. However, someone voted on all 5 before the change was made. You won't be able to change your vote after voting once. So, whoever it is please PM or contact me with your choices in the next two days. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Posted by 0nl1ce 2 years ago Report
Very nice story and what a good idea to put a spin with the NPCs. Makes for some creative world building.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Stories like this one wouldn't have come as soon if it weren't for Thor11's trade idea. Might not have become a series either.
Posted by 0nl1ce 2 years ago Report
Then great work you two!
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
This was insane, the only story I read that is like it is, https://rabbitinafoxden.tumblr.com/post/154062348791/a-commission-for-leshana-her-classmate-is
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Well I hope it was a good "insane", as I felt a bit off my rocker after finishing this story. JK.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
It is high praise, most stories do not go so detailed on the belly stay in all it gore/glory.
Posted by Kronguss 2 years ago Report
Awaaa, this scratches such a specific hard to reach itch! Definitely gonna read your other work. A true banger.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Really, is it the premise of an NPC devouring a main character? Or is it another itch that you are willing to share. I’m glad that you enjoyed this story and I hope that you find my other works interesting as well.
Posted by Kronguss 2 years ago Report
Dehumanisation and casual cruelty aren't often done to this extent. I'm left completely satisfied by everything here~ The npc being a total nobody. Giving enough characterisatuon to the food just to rub it in more. The side characters who are also melting people like it's part of life. The lewdness is fully and completely explored, and I'm jealous of all the food in the story.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
I’ve always tried to include cruelty in my stories. I do agree that the extent to which it was explored in this story is much more thorough than my other stories. But I do think that some of them come close. Top contenders off the top of my head.
1. Pokémon Day Special: Wisped Away
2. Hateful Human, Monstrous Love
3. Sugar Plum
4. Ariana’s Second Wind
5. Carin’ Clair
This list isn’t exhaustive, and I would love for everyone to look at everything in my gallery. But I’m not that selfish as their are a lot of great and better gallery owners here on the portal. I wouldn’t want to distract others from their works, as many of them inspired me as well.
And I definitely feel the way about your work. The absolute abnegation of the prey in your images, I believe, is what earned you the reputation on the portal that you have right now. One that I hope to achieve some day.
Fa-m out!
Posted by mysta 2 years ago Report
Fun story! Someone of import being eaten by an NPC is always fun. The interactions with those who know Gloria were especially entertaining. Each section seems to add a bit of extra flavour to the story, though I do feel like I'd have preferred it more condensed. Because of the length, I couldn't just read everything and was left unsure what sections to skim through or focus on. Maybe the dream sequences could be reduced as they added least for me, even though they are still fun! Just a thought, still a great story, keep up the good work!
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks. Yea I enjoyed the premise of the story as well, especially writing it, which is part of the reason the story ended up getting so long.
“The story is probs going to be less than 10K words.”
Proceeds to change mind after getting the outline.
“The Story should be just a bit over 10K words.” Proceeds to write the first 10th of the story and is proven wrong again.
“Okay it shouldn’t be longer than 14K words.” Proceeds to write story and begins to really enjoy the experience.
“Guess I’ll have to settle for a 16K word story.”
True, I could have split the story into parts, but that was what the “Days” were for. Although they were more of an afterthought, so the content of the story wasn’t as equally distributed as my other two long stories with multiple sections. Divina Vulpes: Vulpish Dining and Pokemon Day Special: Wisped Away. Regardless, I’m still trying to figure out a good balance in my stories, so thanks for the input. I’ll definitely keep up the good work with my stories, the next one of which should be up soonish.
Posted by mysta 2 years ago Report
No need to overthink it! Things like story length can be personal preference. And I agree that splitting it into parts isn't suitable. The days thing was helpful too.
For me, long stories like this are good in subsequent reads as I know the gist of what's coming so I can prioritise focus on the aspects I enjoy most. The drawback is approachability on the first read.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report
This was wonderful! A very enjoyable digestion sequence with a lot of exciting elements. Super enjoyable~
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
I’m glad to hear that. I’ve also found many of your stories to be super enjoyable, so it’s great to hear that a story of mine was able to have the same effect for you.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report
Oh thank you so much~
Your detail onnthe lengthy digestion is really great. Lots of good chunky details.
Makes me wanna write something in the same vein.
Posted by PandaESL 1 year ago Report
Aaaaamazing. I've been reading more of your stuff lately and I'm absolutely loving it lol. I really like stories like these that really draaaag out the digestive process x.x
Posted by Fatedmeal 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I will admit that I’ve been experimenting with some of my stories, but the digestive experience has always been my favorite part of the story to write about.