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Merry Christmas!
Am I aware that it is nowhere near Christmas ?
Yes. Did I write it anyway? Also yes.
A heartwarming Christmas Nativity involving a young girl called Mary.
Just little quick writing exercise as I’m not going to be able to get any my proper stories out for a while.
Special thanks to (name) the idea I decided to write about quickly and it is un beta read. So any mistakes errors or unhinged ramblings are entirely mine.
Please let me know you think in the comments below.
Comments, PM’s and requests always appreciated.
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Posted by ThisisHalloween239 2 years ago Report
Hey, Christmas in July.
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
Mary was hungry, these things happen XD. Besides when the muse motivates it doesn’t always do it to a calendar.
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
Aw thanks! Glad you enjoyed it, mind if I ask your favourite part?
Posted by NyaatoShiroi 2 years ago Report
Good job with this one, so she is actress, right?
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
She’s acting in a student play so she is a student. otherwise yes.
Posted by NyaatoShiroi 2 years ago Report
Oh, gotcha, thanks for answering!
Posted by Sitharc 2 years ago Report
Could go without the masturbation bit myself and it could be longer, but otherwise delightfully evil.
Digestion could've been longer overall, imagine if she ate the baby for mere practice before the main show, giving mostly a whole day to digest the wee one. Then more enjoyment when starts the main show with a baby stuffed colon.
Still great overall tho.
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
Certainly an appealing concept. I was really trying to just get a story out and done quickly. Definitely something I would consider doing if I was taking a bit more time with it.
Posted by Zgorik228 2 years ago Report
I’m so excited of the story! Love how cold and prudent she was)
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
So glad to hear it! Thanks tried to have her be nice and cruel and calculating.
Posted by Carlis 2 years ago Report
Special thanks to (name) the idea Damn ….whos,idea was this and will this character make a return. I love that everyone’s so vain to Mary, her ass better be sore for weeks . Or has she been preparing for this?And that bathroom better fumigated , she strikes me as the kinda creepy girl that has lots of skeletons in her closet literally, can only imagine what her family must be like if this goes on under there noses ? , yet no one would blink Unless they saw her do it . I agree this could be longer too but man short but evil and a element of terror to boot
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
well thank you so much!! i think that marys been a good girl long enough that a few othe kids have be through her..
and dont worries my next one is a bit longer
Posted by Carlis 2 years ago Report
Will mary ever get a sequel? I read a lot of your other stories but I really kinda think some of the subtle things you do with this character stand out it’s REALLY hot how she tastes herself when blowing a kiss good bye
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
To be honest I don't know, I do quite like her as a character and she has some potential ideas that I have in my head but I'm too busy at the moment to do much.
Posted by HMDVore 2 years ago Report
Aside from it being a tad short and a few grammatical errors, very nicely written vore story with the perfect little prey.
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
well that is very high praise indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as Mary enjoyed her meal
Posted by Jadeharleyzz 1 year ago Report
More please!!!!
Posted by Trying124 1 year ago Report
all see what I can do