Posted by vorefanatic314 2 years ago Report

Oh shit, I can’t wait to get home and read this! Just know it’s going to be good! Hope you’re feeling better, hang in there and rest up!

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm testing negative now, so it's just a lingering tiredness and headaches.

Posted by Bolg 2 years ago Report

Four minutes? That seems awfully quick. And that's a huge tease to just compress all that happened into a singular 'Urrp'. I'm hoping that this means at some point we'll have a one-off story that elaborates on those four minutes, because it would seem a travesty for Erika's grand finale to end on this note. I would like to find out how that played out.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Probably not. I'd discussed what happens to Erika with the reader who inspired her, and this is what she preferred. What's left implicit here is deliberately so.

Posted by lazylayjay 2 years ago Report

I'm so excited to see this story on the same day it's posted. Woohoo!

This was the best part. There was a lot of sexy talk among the girls and Summer being very naughty with Martin. It’s not something I'm into but I found it quite hot to read her getting horny.

So is Erika dead? Or I guess that's just the teaser for next time.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Summer was definitely very excited. :D

Erika's story arc has reached its end. I'd discussed it with the reader who inspired her, and I doubt I'll be going into detail about what's left implicit here.

Posted by josiesshrinkkink 2 years ago Report

I'm not used to reading your stories on here so this feels a bit weird. But wow! That was a whole lot of sexiness. Caramel is cute but she is such a tease <3

WTF did Erika get eaten? No way did that happen!!!!

I loved all the vore in the story of course but what got me going the most was Ali and Charlie getting it on. Hot!

You could post this on DA, nobody will mind :)

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Caramel knows how to be wanted. ;) And Ali certainly got special satisfaction from this competition day too!

I'm very glad you've enjoyed it!

Posted by CorruptedBiology 2 years ago Report

I've been reading this series avidly on DA and followed it here so I decided to create an account to comment to say how much I have enjoyed it. Casual vore with realistic characters is very hard to find and I don't think it's appreciated enough. I'm so glad there are writers like you who cater for my very specific tastes.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks for having created an account to write this kind comment. :) That's exactly what I aim for: characters that feel like 'real' people, but with (mostly) casual, light-hearted vore.

Posted by DontTellMyWife 2 years ago Report

A fantastically fun conclusion. Summer is champion of course, her T shirt says so!

If Martin doesn't ask her to marry him after her latest kinky episode then he's a fool.

Good to see Ali getting some action too, she sounds like my kind of woman.

Shock twist with Erika! That's what you get for meddling with criminals.

I hope Mariella enjoys Caramel. They should film it.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thank you very much! :D Summer may have psyched herself into winning. She knew she would never have lived down the shame if she hadn't, with that top!

Give Martin time. For now, he's still trying to cope with her and keep up with her. ;)

Yes poor Erika didn't realise how serious the people she was challenging were...

I think Caramel will *insist* on them filming it when Mariella eats her! ;)

Posted by Mouthplayer 2 years ago Report

Oh no, Erika! It looks like Vore Tour: South Africa will not be going ahead as planned. What a shocking twist. I was told to hold off writing because something was going to happen but I did not expect that. Erika should have heeded Mrs Montano's warnings. The question is what whether Erika's disappearance will trigger more conspiracies and anger. It's a interesting direction to take that plotline if you ever decide to develop it.

I thought the way you portrayed her demise was masterful, it was made more shocking by what we didn’t see and then the realisation that she was being watched more closely than we imagined. It would seem that Bae Kyungsoon laid the perfect trap, using the IVC as a cover for her sinister plan. Very clever.

Apart from that revelation, what an epic conclusion! I was supporting any of the girls, except Mariella a little bit, but I’m pleased Summer won because her kinky antics fit very well with a scene in the part of Vore Tour I have just started writing. All will be revealed soon if I can find some extra hours to write.

I was almost as shocked by Caramel's decision to let Mariella eat her. That is a surprise. Mariella is a hard woman to resist but I was sure Caramel would opt for someone like Vivee. I doubt Mariella will be too bothered though, she will be thrilled to gulp down that energetic kiwi :)

Thank you again for including Mariella, Eva and Ghalia in this final. It’s always a pleasure to have ideas as part of your stories, and you always develop the characters into believable human beings.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! And you're very welcome, of course. They're fun to write! :)

Poor Erika got very neatly tricked, yes. She certainly wasn't expecting that. And from the point of view of anyone wondering about her, she'll simply have disappeared without a trace.

Ha, now I'm very curious about what will happen next in the Vore Tour episode, and how Summer's kinky pleasures fit into it! :D Also, it's nice that *someone* is glad she won!

Mariella is fantastic, and deserves her tasty, warm wiggly Caramel treat. ;) Though from now until when she swallows her, she'll have to adapt to Caramel's liveliness and strong-mindedness!

Posted by Mouthplayer 2 years ago Report

She had a taste of assertive prey with Dael so she has an idea of what to expect. I think she'll enjoy being teased a little bit ;)

I'll have to try and slip a reference to Caramel into Vore Tour somewhere. I reckon Anisha will be insanely jealous. I wonder when we'll find out when Mariella has actually eaten her, will it be a standalone story or part of the next IVC?

The Summer inspired part of Vore Tour will probably not immediately follow where we left off. It might be in Part 4 or 5. I've starting writing it but there are other sequences ahead of it chronologically which I haven’t written yet.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Ha, yes, something else for Anisha to be terribly jealous about! :D

Good question. It may be quite a while before I write another IVC story, and I haven't thought it through yet. So if you'd enjoy writing Mariella and Caramel's story yourself, do feel free! ;) If not, I'll definitely get round to it eventually, of course.

Posted by Mouthplayer 2 years ago Report

Thanks for the offer but I don’t think I would be comfortable writing the end of the Caramel saga. I have written Vore Tour on the premise that it takes place after the IVC final so in principle Mariella has already eaten Caramel. If you agree I can make references to it having happened but no specific details? ;)

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

That would be great, yes!

Posted by Yabbacat 2 years ago Report

I don't understand why the final part of the story is not on DA. I'm just glad that I could read it.

I loved it. The competition was fun. I don't mind Summer but I wanted Mariella to win because she's my favourite.

But I suppose she got a better prize by winning Caramel :D

I'm in a state of confusion about Erika, I thought she was going to do good but now it seems she has been killed by the evil forces she was fighting against. I'm actually quite sad about that. I hope there’s a way that she's still alive.

I liked Eva, I'd like to read more about her <3

Thank you for giving me a part in one of your stories :)

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

You're welcome. :) Summer is happy to have won, but yes, Mariella has also won a very coveted prize there! A lot of people are going to be very jealous.

Eva is a sweetheart. :) She's a good person, and considerate towards the people she eats. We may well see her again some day.

Posted by Bellyache 2 years ago Report

I've been so looking forward to this and it did not dissappoint!

I think Ali is my favorite character. She’s so naughty! And for some reason I didn't realize she was single, lucky Charlie <3

It seems Erika has been silenced for good, I'm truly shocked by that plot twist. I'm hoping there will be some justice for Mrs Bae in a future story.

I'm sorry but I'm not a fan of Summer. She is just an awful person. At least Erika had decent principes.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

I'm glad you've enjoyed it! :) Ali may not be in the limelight, but she knows what fun she wants and how to get it. ;)

Poor Summer! She's... Well, yes, she's certainly a bit self-centred. But she's not a bad person at heart.

Posted by Diabolique 2 years ago Report

Un point culminant époustouflant! Summer a remporté le concours et s'est récompensée par une célébration endiablée. Elle doit se sentir bien d'avoir cela libéré.

Erika a été avertie qu'elle était surveillée. Elle aurait dû écouter!

J'aimerais en savoir plus sur la prochaine rencontre de Mariella et Caramel ensemble.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Merci ! Summer sait se faire plaisir. :D Et oui, nous renverrons Mariella et Caramel ensemble !

Posted by Pabulum 2 years ago Report

This is fabulous! A real treat from start to finish and some suspense with the mysterious organization who have been monitoring Erika.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm very pleased you've enjoyed it. :)

Posted by HappyBlanket 2 years ago Report

I loved the final parts of this with all the prey getting happily swallowed. It sounds like its loads of fun. I like Ali a lot, she’s funny :D

No happy ending for Erika though. Will anybody miss her?

I hope theres another IVC story. Its one of my favorites :)

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! The IVC is lots of fun for all involved. :) There'll certainly be another story. Probably not soon... but some day!

Posted by Sleepless 2 years ago Report

That was a fantastic finish! Summer sure is one kinky bitch! Lucky Martin ;)

Nice twist with Erika. She didn’t see that coming!

Will there be more IVC?

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Summer definitely knows what she wants, and how to enjoy herself. :D

There'll be more IVC some day, yes.

Posted by MrDave 2 years ago Report

You did a great job with the post-vore sex scenes! Must be horrible for all the tinies being wildly churned around by the stomach muscles, knowing Ali /Sommer have sex and they both don't pay any attention at all :D

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! And having tiny, helpless people moving inside their tummy certainly gave more pleasure to Ali and Summer during sex. ;)

Posted by Cmoney 2 years ago Report

Haven't kept up with you in a while but I enjoyed the whole latest saga here a lot. You are still a master at your craft. Poor naive Erika though, kinda slow on the uptake there. I Saw what was coming the moment they demanded her phone. Always be vigilant when people are out to get you, a lesson for others at this point and not her unfortunately. Hope you continue to drop good content, take care.

Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I think Erika didn't really take the threats seriously. Not until the very last moment, when it was too late.

I've been far too busy, but I do hope to get a story written for Christmas!

Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report

This was a great chapter. For a bit there, I i thought Ali was going to have herself a little ‘Charlie-snack’.

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I don't think Charlie would agree to that, but there are plenty of other people for Ali to eat. ;)