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It's good advice, whether that someone is your friend you want to keep close, or a vampire you want to keep far, far away. It's not always easy, though. In either case.
So much happened so quickly in the past week for Jack and Fiona. Nobody else in their lives have really had the chance to catch up. Well, both Sarabeth and Ozzy are about to get some idea. Let's see how they react. And let's see how Fiona and Jack react as well; I don't think they've quite caught up with themselves yet either.
This series is thanks to the continued efforts and pleasures of myself and co-creator x9comega. Who'd've guessed it would still be going strong after 2 1/2 years?! Luckily, you can (presumably) read much faster than I can be bothered to write, so if you wanna catch up on all that's happened so far, you can find the entire series at the link below:
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Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report
"I won't make the mistake of getting caught". That attitude is going in the wrong direction there. Plus, wouldn't that be very difficult since werewolves have keen senses?
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Yes on both counts. Guess we'll have to see how she deals with things.
Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
Well, so much for Sarabeth's friendship...at least for now. Maybe Jack'll win her over eventually, but for now...
I suppose one thing Sarabeth has going for her plans is that she's not directly involved, especially given her position of "can't eat him myself because Fiona would smell him on my breath," so she can't REALLY be blamed if one of them ends up working. Then again, she'll need better agents than Wiley if she wants ANY of those plans to work..
And who knows, maybe Sarabeth WILL take a shot at Jack herself at some point. Probably out of pure frustration, but you never know!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
I still dont get why Sarabeth wants to bump off Jack so badly. Its not like he hates her or anything. At the very least he tolerates her and doesnt mind being around her so I dont get the hostility. If its really just a matter of monopolizing Fiona's time then clearly Sarabeth has only ever had one friend.
Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
If I had to guess, it's probably twofold; first of all, literally what you said: she doesn't really seem to have other friends, not that we have enough of a window into her personal life (that I'm aware of) to confirm that. Rather she has...let's call it an attitude. A haughty one. Probably something to do with her upbringing. Fiona was nice to her, which stood out and led to an obsession. Sarabeth strikes me as nearing the "yandere" type.
And honestly, who knows, maybe vampires get treated differently than other preds and/or naturally keep themselves apart. Interracial predator biases could be a thing, maybe a question for the next Q&A.
Aside from that, her opinion towards humans in general seems to fit more into Arthur's thought patterns than not. Jack's as below her as a pea impaled on her fork. Let's not forget, Sarabeth was introduced in a chapter called "Don't Make Vampires Jealous." She doesn't like seeing him getting attention from Fiona.
The shame of it all being that she could USE Jack to get closer to Fiona, but...that's not her first thought what with the aforementioned attitude and obsession.
Disclaimer: I don't know what I'm talking about, but I do enjoy wildly speculating.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
This response is widely accurate. Always cool to see someone understanding the character pretty much just the way I intended. Though I think Sarabeth and Arthur look down on Jack for slightly different reasons.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Through Serabeth has shown some signs she likes Jack prehaps in the future she winds up eating Jack and suddenly realizing she does not want to digest.
Or what could be really funny/traumatizing she decides she does not want to be friends with prey so decides to make Jack a pred, whatever he wants to or not.
Posted by 2Ron2R 2 years ago Report
I've often wondered about relations between different types of preds. Vampires in-particular can be mistaken for humans at a glance, that's got to create prejudices.
Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
...Or accidents. Now THAT could be funny.
Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report
I wouldn't say interspecies biases is something of a big thing, or Lily and Grizz would be subject to the same stigma. But I get from what you're saying though.
Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Ah, Sarabeth. So smart, yet so dumb...
...I wonder if the pudge from eating Arthur is still visible on Fiona, come to think of it. A reminder for everyone involved.
(Great chapter! "Mutt" has two T's, though.)
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Nice catch on that typo. I feel like I've made that mistake a few times now; gotta remember it cause apparently my spellchecker doesn't flag it.
I think you might have made a little mistake too, though. Fiona eating Arthur? I don't remember that happening XD
Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
ACK. Yep, typo.
...Well, a reader can dream!! It would definitely be a fitting end for that jerk.
Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report
"Don’t Get Under Someone’s Skin"
Doesn't Jack technically always get "Under someone's skin"???
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Yes, and it would be good advise for him not to! XD
Posted by sadcat 2 years ago Report
All I need is char improvement on Fiona and I'm gucci. (others as well, but she the most on my standards, the way you guys wrote about how she felt bad was chef's kiss detailed, well played~)
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Thanks. Good thing there's lots of obvious room to improve from the level of "ditch your best friend and eat his friend alive".
Posted by VincentRamone 2 years ago Report
Kay so Sarabeth still wants to be rid of Jack then. Ya think she would have a bit more loyalty than that she did save him before, oh well I'm curious to see if she'll succeed or not then. If she somehow does she'll have to carry a secret from Fiona for the rest of her life. If she doesn't and Fiona learns about it will absolutely burn any chance she ever had.
I don't know when I got so damn invested in this story, I do know I'm always waiting for the next one with anticipation.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Always love hearing that; never gets old. Happy to entertain. Yeah, I'd say Sarabeth is in an interesting, almost precarious situation here.
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report
What are the odds that Ozzy is probably gonna plot revenge against Fiona? Because we all know by now that that incident with Zach is actually Arthur’s fault. Fiona may have eaten Zach, but only because she was just doing with Arthur told her to do, if you know what I mean.
Posted by aperson1234567890 1 year ago Report
I do hope Jack does tell Fiona about just how many times he nearly died and just how close some of the calls were because she wasn't there. While she is regretful I don't think she fully realizes just HOW badly she messed up. She nearly lost her best friend easily over a dozen times cause she was busy chasing tail.
Posted by 1ring42 8 months ago Report
Sarabeth Sarabeth Sarabeth so close yet so far.