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The Beautiful Betrayal of Baked Beth By TheRealRD -- Report

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A 2nd-person story where you're a woman named Beth who thinks her long-time boyfriend Mark is surprising her with a romantic dinner. Turns out Mark has found a new lover and YOU'RE their dinner tonight!

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Deviantcook64

Posted by Deviantcook64 2 years ago Report

wow this is good. I don't normally go for second person stuff, but wow. hits just right. Fantastic story.

Tyroneblacksmith5

Posted by Tyroneblacksmith5 2 years ago Report

Ngl, when I saw 2nd person, I wasn't really expectinh much but god damn is this story good. You exceeded my expectations and I hope you continue to put out good shit like this a job well done. *claps*

Tyroneblacksmith5

Posted by Tyroneblacksmith5 2 years ago Report

Expecting*

milkytascha

Posted by milkytascha 2 years ago Report

Beth is really inconsiderate and selfish through all of this, with all the whining. Thats no good form for a turkey. Luckily the chefs aren't to bothered by it.

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 2 years ago Report

I couldn't agree more! Beth was an entitled brat to the end, but at least she...y'know...ended.

Genericcook

Posted by Genericcook 2 years ago Report

Absolutely wonderful!!! As always your stories are AMAZING

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 2 years ago Report

Haha, thank you so much for reading and commenting, kitvander! I really appreciate your patronage!

Badviper

Posted by Badviper 2 years ago Report

This is pretty much my entire fantasy. So hot~ Came three times just reading it the first time. >///<

TheRealRD

Posted by TheRealRD 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much! You came three times just reading it? How many times do you think I came WRITING it? LMAO

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 4 months ago Report

Thats super flipping hot